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Posted: 17 August 2008 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rlrl

Hiiii Vartika Darling kaisi hai sweety.
hmmmm ab UD ki baat.story bahat achha hai yar par isme tune Alekh ko Naina ka bhai banaya.Good change sweety. aur woww naina Bua ban ne wali hai .very good.aur raj kyun nahin hai story me.kab ayega wo.usko jaldi wapas lao.aur ye kya naina ro rahi hai .wo Tum Bin ke gane me jo ki mera fav hai.hehehe.song selection achha hai aur me to singer hoo to song ka selection hi dekhungi hehehe.aur ek baat bata ye Karan kaun hai .who is he??Shocked kahin wo naina ka bachpan ka dost to nahin hai na.Embarrassed ab jo bhi ho uska letter bahat achha tha usne naina ko moti kaha hehe  naughty boy hehe.update was just super cooooool.amzing .outstanding dear keep writing n update soon sweety.
lots of love
Riti.Smile
thanks dear. SmileSmile
mai tere se naraj hoon.Angry
Tum Bin ka ye song mera bhi fav hai.Big smile
Alekh ne shaddi ki hai to baap bhi banega na kabhi na kabhi.LOLLOLLOL
Abbhi aage aage dekh kya hota hai.Wink
Karan kaun hai ye jaldi hi pata chal jaayega is ud me.WinkWink
me too love u.

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Posted: 17 August 2008 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lrl_01

v.niceClapwaiting for more
thanks abhi karti hoon ud.SmileSmile

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Posted: 17 August 2008 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashu20

hi
a new ff...its good......loved it...and as the character are from lrl ,tat makes it more close to our heart.
 
thanks ashu darling.
ye to sach hai ki LRL k sab characters humare dil k bahut kareeb hain.

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Posted: 17 August 2008 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by KRIZZY

awesome................mindblowing one dear
i loved d staring
it was really very emotional ud
u have chosen a right song for the situation
i truly loved d ud
keep it up!
thanks for liking n selection of song dear.

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Posted: 18 August 2008 at 12:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pritib0

HII VARTIKA DEAR KAISI HO SWEETY? MAINE TUMHARA UD PADHA DEAR, MUJHE BAHUT HI PASAND AAYA, KAAFI EMOTIONAL PART THA YEH WAALA, PLZZZ JALDI SE RAJ KI ENTRY KARAO NA SWEETY. WILL BE WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, AND GOOD WISHES, PRITI.
thanks aur haan aage aur bhi accha ud hoga.TongueTongue
Ye thoda action pack fic hoga.WinkWinkWink
Par accha lagega aap sab ko.SmileSmile
I am shure.

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Posted: 18 August 2008 at 12:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suhana_dixit

part 1 of the update was really emotional n touchy....But 1 thing pls do bring back Rajveer ..So Yudi is finally getting married
 
waiting for the next part
yeah thanks dear.
Mai koshish karoongi ki aap sab ko ye fic humesha aachi lage.SmileSmile

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Posted: 18 August 2008 at 12:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!
 thanks Shaina ji.SmileSmile
Naina's pain is so well portrayed!!!!Smile Smile SmileShe is hesitant to go back to Ambala and KMA kyunki waha usne Raj aur Navin dono ko khoya tha!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry
haan sach me yaar.CryCry
 
Aalekh baap banne wala hai!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueThats good news!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile
haan shaadi ki hai to kabhi na kabhi baap banega hi na.LOLLOLLOL
 
Naina ke cousin Karan ne usse khat likha!!!!Smile Smile SmileThats good!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Approve
Cousin nahi hai Karan.
Karan us ka bachpan ka dost hai.WinkWink
 
By the way is the role of Karan played by Hiten Tejwani??Smile Smile
vo is ud me pata chal jaayega.Wink
 
Yudi ki shaadi ho rahi hai magar kisse??Confused Confused Confused
vo to Yudi ka surprise hai vahi jaane.TongueTongue
 
The song was very nice!!!Smile Smile Smile It portrayed Naina feelings beautifully!!!Smile Smile Smile
thanks i love this song too much,SmileSmile
 
Poor Naina!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry CryRaj ko kitna miss karti hai!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry CryRaj aur Navin dono ne hi usse akela chhod diya!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry
haan ye to hai par umeed par duniya kayam hai.WinkWink
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 18 August 2008 at 12:22am | IP Logged
Here's next part:-
 
A man called his boss, his boss picks the phone.

 

"Haan bolo kya khabar hai?"

 

"Boss vo Pune Academy me aa rahi hai."He told.

 

"Bahut acche kisi ko us k aane k bare me pata to nahi hai na. Mera matlab maksad to pata nahi hai na." The Boss asked.

 

"Nahi boss us ko bhi nahi pata hai ki us ki posting  yahan kyoun ki gayi hai." The man said.

 

"Theek hai , tum najar rakho us par aur mujhe khabar karte rehna." He instructed him n hung the phone.

 

"Welcome Captain Naina ah' Singh Ahluwalia." The man said n smiled.

 

Here the same day Naina ko yaad aaya are aaj hi to hai 18th Karan to aaj hi aane waala hai na. She thought n called Karan; par koi fayda nahi phone is out of coverage.

 

Karan ( Karan Singh Grover) is childhood friend of Naina and Naveen . He was their neighbor . He loves Naina much more than any one. This feeling was only as friends . Often people take their relation in wrong way.

 

Par Naina k dil me to Raj hai na aur to koi aa hi nahi sakta na.Ye baat bus vo log jaante the jo Naina k bahut kareeb the jaise us k dost aur Huda bhi jaanta tha ab to. Jab Naina lagaatar M.B.A. k liye jaane ki jid kar rahi thi to Huda ko bataya tha us ne ki he loved Rajveer. Huda k dil par kya beeti thi ye to Huda hi jaane.

 

Par pyaar to kar liya than a ek baar Naina ne bus vo pyaar poora nahi ho paaya kabhi Ritu Mishra aur kabhi maut ne aa kar raasta rok liya Naina aur Raj ka.

 

Naina ne poore ghar ko set karna start kiya aur set kar te karte achanak use yaad aaya ki us ne Yudi se poocha hi nahi ki us ki shaadi kis se ho rahi hai. She called Yudi n after five minutes it's connected.

 

"Hello Naina kaise ho?" Yudi asked her with happiness.

 

"Mai theek hoon tu bata kaisa hai?" Naina asked.

 

"Are ab to bhai bilkul theek hain aur hona bhi chahiye." It was Neelu who snatched phone from Yudi n started talking.

 

"Kaise hai Neelu tu? " Naina asked.

 

"Mai theek hoon tu bata kya chal raha hai?"Neelu aksed.

 

"Chal to tere saath raha hai na kuch." Naina said naughtily.

 

"Accha is ka matlab tere bhai ne sab bata diya tujhe." Neelu said.

 

"Haan , vaise bhi agar tu nahi batayegi to vo to batayega hi na. Kya naam socha hai mere niece ka?" Naina asked.

 

"Tujhe kaise pata ki beti hogi?" Neelu asked.

 

"Mujhe lagta hai beti hi hogi na." Naina said.

 

"Haan mujhe bhi lagta hai. Pata hai Alekh bhi chahta hai ki beti ho."Neelu said shyly.

 

"Oho to Neelu ji ko sharam bhi aati hai." Naina teased her.

 

"Vaise maine ye tere upper choda hai ki naam kya rakhegi tu beti ka.?" Neelu told her smilng.

 

"Accha maine to naam bhi soch liya hai beta hua to Alankaar aur beti hue to Akarshita." Naina told.

 

"Accha dono ka naam usi k naam se aur mera kya?" Neelu asked in a fake complaining tone.

"Jab doosra hoga na to us ka naam apne naam par rakh lena theek hai." Naina said in a joking tone.

 

"Agar nand bhabhi baat kar chuki hon to mai apni dost se baat kar sakta hoon?" Yudi asked Neelu.

 

"Accha le." Neelu said Yudi n to Naina she said, "ok bye Naina 20th ko milte hain." N she handed over it to Yudi.

 

"Haan bol kaise hai?" Yudi asked.

 

"Mai acchi hoon tu ye bata ki shaddi kis se kar raha hai ye to tune bataya hi nahi." Naina asked.

 

"Vo surprise hai aana to dekhna. Maine kisi ko nahi bataya hai. Neelu se bhi mana kiya hai kisi se kuch bhi batane ko." Yudi said in a naughty tone.

 

"Accha theek hai chal fir 20th ko milte hain.Bye take care."

 

"U too Naina." Yudi said n both hung the phone.

 

Naina soch me pad gayi ki kis se shaddi kar raha hai Yudi. Khair surprise hai doston k liye to tabhi pata chalega na.

 

'Pata nahi aaj mai itna bechain kyoun hoon? Subah se hi lag raha hai ki kuch ajeeb sa hone waala hai aisa pehle kabhi to nahi hua na . Kyoun mai aaj aisa feel kar rahi hoon baar baar.' Naina soche jaa rahi thi. Phir us ne mom se bola apni ki Karan ka manpasand khana banaye.

 

Achanak Naina ka mobile ring hua. Screen par Huda ka naam aate dekh kar Naina ne phone uthaya.

 

"Hello Huda kahan hai tu aaj kal aur kaisa hai?" Naina asked.

 

"Oye Phoolan mai to theek hoon tu kaise hai? Aawaaz teri bhari kyoun lag rahi hai yaar?" Huda was concerned.

 

"Nahi bus thoda thaki hue hoon na isiliye. Par tu kahan hai ? Pata hai 6 months baad aaj tere se baat ho rahi hai meri. Maine kitni baar tera phone try kiya par not available to kabhi switched off."Naina ne bataya.

 

"Haan yaae ek screat mission par gaya tha. Jaane k pehle kisi ko nahi bata sakta tha." Huda told her.

 
"To kaisa raha tera mission?" Naina asked.

 

"Usi k bare me baat karni hai tujh se." He told.

 

"Par mere se kya baat karni hai mission se related?" Naina was confused.

 

"Tera transfer hua hai na Pune Academy? Bus us k hi bare me baat karni hai kuch." Huda told her.

 

"Tujhe kaise pata?" Naina shocked.

 

"Jyada chauk mat. Jaroori hai baat isiliye bola Phoolan. Bus mujhe tu ye bata ki tu Yudi ki shaddi me kab tak pahuchegi?" Huda was really tensed.

 

"Mai 20 ko pahuchoongi." Naina bhi ab tense ho rahi thi ki aakhir maamla kya hai.

 

"Theek hai tabhi wahan milte hain. See u there bye n take care." Huda said n hung the phone.

 

Naina bye bhi nahi bol paayi Huda ko. 'Ye achanak Huda ko hua kya hai' Aaj se pehle us ne kabhi is tarah se behave nahi kiya. Phir aaj achanak .Jaroor koi serious baat hogi varna Huda aisa kaise kar sakta hai. Mai apne doston ko acchi tarah se jaanti hoon. Vo apni jaan de sakte hain apne desh aur apne farz k liye. Huda kisi misson k bare me baat kar raha than a. Jarror us ki koi na koi link Pune Academy se judi hai tabhi vo keh raha tha ki Phoolan mil k bataonga.?

 

 

It's 12:30 p.m. aur Naina ka mood bahut accha nahi hai isiliye Karan ko lene nahi jaa rahi hai vaise bhi vo jaanti hai ki Karan kabhi bhi shariffo ki tarah to seedhe se aayega nahi ghar vo daudte bhaagte , uchalte, koodte aayega na. Vaise bhi Karan ne bataya to hai nahi ki vo kis flight se kahan tak aayega to kaise aur kahan jaaye Naina Karan ko lene.To us ne socha kyoun na ghar par hi baith kar aaraam kare vo aa jaayega aaram se.? Naina sochne lagi ki aisa kya ho sakta hai.

 

Idhar Huda:-

 

'Oye sorry Phoolan par mai jaanta tha ki agar mai aage baat karoonga to tu jo poochegi vo mai bata nahi apponga. Isiliye maine phone kaat diya aur accha hoga ki agar hum mil k baat kare.' Huda thought in his mind.This time his mind was racing ki kaise kya kya set hoga.

 

At atlest 2:00 p.m. the door bell rang.  Naina went to open the door n she was shocked to see the sight in front of her eyes. She couldn't control n started laughing uncontrolled.Kuch der tak vo pet pakad pakd k haste rahi.Vo manjar hi kuch aisa tha ki dekhne waala paagal ho jaaye haste haste.

 



Edited by Mahak Sinha - 18 August 2008 at 12:41am

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