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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
Sounds interesting...plzzzz start the story soon....

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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
sounds very intersting.....it would be good to have a FF with the original LRL story track......we all miss it..........so please do continue and update as soon as possible.

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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
hey it realy sounds intrestn realy gud,

contn dear,


Aarthi

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Posted: 10 August 2008 at 4:55am | IP Logged
 HELLO! I AM NEW IN THIS FORUM UR NEW FF SOUND'S INTESTING PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE DEAR.

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Posted: 10 August 2008 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
Hey guys ye raha first part read n pls give ur comments.
 
"Kyoun bhaiya kyoun humesha kyoun aisa hota ; mai jo nahi chahti hoon vahi kyoun karna padta hai mujhe. Kyoun bhaiya kyoun?Humesha vahi kiya hai maine jo nahi karna chahti thi." She was crying hard. "Mujhe ek baar fir , ek baar fir us jagah jaana hoga jahan maine apno ko khoya tha. "

 

"Beta sab theek ho jaayega tu mat ro aise. Tu jaanti hai na ki Navin k jaane k baad tu hi humara bacha hua sahara hai. Agar tu is tarah royegi to ............" She too couldn't control her tears n started crying hard.

 

They both hugged each other tightly. She was crying hard that day. Lag raha tha aaj vo saare ansoon jo kahin andar dab gaye the in do salon me vo bahar nikal aaye hain.

 

 Captain Naina Singh Ahluwalia a strong,detemined n brave officer of Indian Army. Shayad ye us k mentor ki hi di hue training ka nateeja tha jo itne kam waqt me vo Lt. Naina se Captain Naina ban gayi thi . Vo akeli nahi thi us k saath us k dost har pal the. Lt. Yudi jo ki Siyachin me posted tha, captain Ali Beg jo is time Rajashtan me posted tha, Lt. Pooja Beg jo Ali se shaadi kar k Rajasthan k Jaisalmer me Ali k saath hi posted thi. Captain Amardeep Huda jo abhi Delhi me posted tha aur last but not the least Naina ka bhai ya sab se accha dost Captain Alekh Sharma jo ab apni wife Neelu k saath Pune me posted tha.

 

Sab k sab settle ho chuke hain bus Huda aur Naina ko chod kar. Yudi ki shaadi fix kar di hai us k dad ne aur kuch hi dino baad us ki shaadi hai. Shaadi hogi Ambala se. Yudi ne Naina ko phone kar k bataya tha ki us ki shaadi isi maheene ki 25 ko hai aur 20 ko sagai hai.

 

Tab se Naina k man me ajeeb se udher bun chal rahi thi ki vahi Ambala vahi KMA,kaise kaise................ Kya karein ye zindagi bhi na hum ko bus isi tarah k khel dikhati hai.

 

Tabhi darwaaje ki ring baji aur Naina k papa ne darwaaja khola. Bahar ek post man tha  jo Captain k liye koi jaroori chitthi le kar aaya tha.Chittiyan do thi aur dono hi Naina k naam par thi.

 

Naina k papa chitti le kar andar aaye.

 

"Kaun tha ji?" her mom asked .

 

"Postman tha kuch jaroori letters aaye hain Naina k liye." Her papa handed over letters to her.

 

She was still crying but letter dekh kar us ne pehle letter khola.

 

 'Hey Moti,

 

Kaise hai tu?

Uncle aunty kaise hain?

Suna hai tera promotion ho gaya hai. Bhool gayi na mujhe. Ek baar phone kar k nahi bata sakti thi ki kya?

Mai bahut naraj hoon tujh se.

Ye bhi koi baat hai kya?

Are agar phone number nahi tha to kam se kam letter hi likh deti. Kyounki tu to mail ka bhi reply karna jaroori nahi samjhti hai.

Kitne mail kiye tujhe but no reply.

Kahan hai tu aur ho kya gaya hai tujhe.

Accha ab sun jo main baat hai. Mai do dino baad Dehradoon aa raha hoon.

Do din matlab 18 th ko .

Pata nahi ye Indian post kab tak tujhe letter mile.

Aaoonga to mil k khoob saari baatein karenge.

 

With lots of love for u n uncle aunty.

Karan.'

 

Finally Naina smiled after reading this letter. Her mom n dad were happy that finally she smiled again.

 

The next was an official letter. Us me Naina k posting k details the. Mission se aane k baad Naina ko kuch dino tak chutti di gayi thi; us ko aaye hue abhi bus 3 din hi hue the aur us ki next posting Pune me thi.

 

She read the letter n took out her cell phone to call Alekh who was already there. He was taking a class that time. He saw the no n smiled but didn?t receive.

May b he will be busy she thought n cut the phone.

 

After sometime Alekh called her.

 

"Haan bol kaise hai tu?" he asked concerned.

 

"Mai theek hoon tu phone kyoun nahi utha raha tha?" Naina asked trying to hide her sadness.

 

"To fir se jhooth bol raheli hai na Sudhar nahi sakti hai tu apun se hi sab chupayegi na." Alekh was worried about her.

 

"Nahi vo bus. Accha sun ye bata Neelu kaise hai?"Naina again tried to avoid the topic.

 

"Acchi hai aur haan tere ko kuch batana tha abhi kuch der pehle Neelu ka phone aaya tha " ,he paused n again said, " Tu buva bun ne waali hai." He said it taking a deep breath.

 

"Kya????????? "Sach Alekh.? She finally overwhelmed with joy.

 

"Haan baba sacchi baat hai ye." Alekh could't hide happiness in his voice n he too felt that Naina is so happy.

 

"Alekh mai bahut khush hoon tum dono k liye. Accha tere ko ek baat batani thi.?"Naina said n told about her third posting orders.

 

"Are waah ye to bahut acchi baat hai na.To kab aayegi tu yahan ? Kab se join karna hai?" Alekh bhi kush tha ek hi din me do do acchi khabrein paa kar.

 

"Mai Yudi ki shaadi k baad on 27th join karoongi PuneAcademy." Naina told n again sadness enveloped her.

 

"Samajh gaya apun tujhe Ambala jaana hai isi baat se tu dukhi hai na?" Alekh asked.

 

There was a utter silence between Alekh n Naina.Finally Alekh broke the silence.

 

"Theek hai fir Yudi ki shaadi me apna saara saaman le kar aana. Vahi se niklenge." He said.

 

"Hmmmm", she nodded n said," Accha phone rakhti hoon. Tu apna kaam kar.?"

 
"Theek hai mil kar baat karenge.Apna khayal rakhna" He said n bid her bye.

 

"Bye n take care of my would b niece n my bhabhi both." She too bid him good bye n hung the phone.

 

She took a deep breath and again memory of Raj enveloped her.

 

Tum Bin jiya jaye kaise,

Kaise jiya jaaye tum bin;

Sadiyon se lambi hai raatein,

Sadiyon se lambe hue din

 

Aa jao laut kar tum, ye dil keh raha hai,

Aa jao laut kar tum, ye dil keh raha hai,

 

Oooo...........................

Fir shame tanhaiye jaagi,

Fir yaad tum aa rahe ho;

Fir jaa nikalne lagi hai,

Fir mujh ko tadpa raho hooooooooooooo

 

Fir mujh ko tadpa rahe ho,

Is dil me yaadon k mele hain;

Tum bin bahut hum akele hain,

Aa jao laut kar fir , ye dil keh raha hai;

 

Tum Bin jiya jaye kaise,

Kaise jiya jaaye tum bin;

Sadiyon se lambi hai raatein,

Sadiyon se lambe hue din

 

Aa jao laut kar tum, ye dil keh raha hai,

Aa jao laut kar tum, ye dil keh raha hai,

 

Kya kya na socha tha maine,

Kya kya na sapne sajaye,

Kya kya na chaha tha dil ne,

Kya kya na arma jagyeeeeeeeee

Kya kayr na armaa jagayeeeeeeee;

 

Is dil se tufaan gujarte hain,

Tum bin to jeete na marte hai;

Aa jao laut kar tum , ye dil keh raha hai,

Aa jaao laut kar fir ye dil keh raha hai.

 

Tum Bin jiya jaye kaise,

Kaise jiya jaaye tum bin;

Sadiyon se lambi hai raatein,

Sadiyon se lambe hue din

 

Aa jao laut kar tum, ye dil keh raha hai,

Aa jao laut kar tum, ye dil keh raha hai,

 

Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

 

Pata nahi kitne khayal dimaag me aate hain. 'Kyoun sir aap mujhe chod kar chale gaye, apni Naina ah' Singh ko chod kar. Aap ne wada kiya tha ki humesha mere saath rahenge kabhi mujhe chod kar kahin nahi jaayenge, fir bhi kyoun? Pehle bhaiya chale gaye aur fir aap . Aap don one ek baar bhi nahi socha na ki mai kis k sahare jeeongi.'



Edited by Mahak Sinha - 10 August 2008 at 11:31pm

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Posted: 10 August 2008 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
WWOOOWWWW...i luved ur update..it was very touching and emotional.....cant wait for the next partClap

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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 12:18am | IP Logged
too good.awesome.rajveer ko jaldi wapas lao.cont soon......

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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 1:06am | IP Logged
Hiiii Vartika Darling kaisi hai sweety.
hmmmm ab UD ki baat.story bahat achha hai yar par isme tune Alekh ko Naina ka bhai banaya.Good change sweety. aur woww naina Bua ban ne wali hai .very good.aur raj kyun nahin hai story me.kab ayega wo.usko jaldi wapas lao.aur ye kya naina ro rahi hai .wo Tum Bin ke gane me jo ki mera fav hai.hehehe.song selection achha hai aur me to singer hoo to song ka selection hi dekhungi hehehe.aur ek baat bata ye Karan kaun hai .who is he??Shocked kahin wo naina ka bachpan ka dost to nahin hai na.Embarrassed ab jo bhi ho uska letter bahat achha tha usne naina ko moti kaha hehe  naughty boy hehe.update was just super cooooool.amzing .outstanding dear keep writing n update soon sweety.
lots of love
Riti.Smile

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