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Afsana pyaar ka part 27 pg98 updated (Page 7)

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it was fantastic yaar do cont...

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thanxxxxxx dear for ur comments will try n update soon
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hey guys i am back with my update

here it goes

Part-7

veer along with sia makes a plan to scare antara but unfortunately when they were planing dharam hears each and every thing

dharam:veer hum tumhe aisa nahi karne denge
sia:par dharam hum dono sirf mazak karenge
dharam:rajkumari sia aap bhi is nalayak ki baaton mein aa gayi
sia:hum to sirf maza lene ke liye ye sab kar rahen hai
dharam:par hume ye sab kuch theek nahi lag raha
sia:dekho aap ko agar hum par bharosa hai to aap bhi humara saath denge
dharam:par.........
sia:par var kuch nahi haan ya na
dharam:theek hai par ek baat bataiye ki aap pehle to itni seedhi thi ab aap itni natkhat kaise ho gayi
sia:vo kya hai na antara humari behen hai to uski aadate hum mein bhi aati jaa rahi hain
dharam:acha ye batao hume kya karna hoga
veer:kuch jyada nahi ek saadi pehnani hogi
dharam:veer kya tum pagal ho gaye ho hum aur
sia:dharam humare liye
dharam:theek hai
veer:to tum aur sia andar antara ke kamre mein jaoge aur mein bahar se darawani aawaj nikalunga

in the night sia gets ready and veer is waiting for dharam and then dharam comes

veer:kahaan reh gaye the itni der laga di
dharam:saadi pehnane mein tym lag gaya
veer:vaise dharam..................................tum kaafi ache lag rahe ho ek kala teeka bhi laga lo kahin kisi ki nazar na lag jaye
dharam:veer tumhe to hum baad mein dekhenge

all three of them goes towards antara's room

on dat night sia was looking very beautiful and all the way dharam was just staring her aur tabhi ek hawa ka jhoka aata hai aur sia ke baal uske muh par aa jate hai dharam apne haatho se uske baal hatata hai aur sia bhi uski aankho ki gaharai mein doob jati hai

on the other side veer aage chalta jaata hai aur kuch der baad use pata chalta hai ki sia aur dharam to uske saath aaye hi nahi aur vo unhe doondne ke liye nikalta hai veer dhekta hai ki vo dono ek doosre ki aankhomein khoye hue hai

veer:oooooooooooohhhhhhh
dharam:veer tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho tum bhool gaye hum yahaan kisliye aaye hai
veer:achha bache hum bhool gaye aur tum jo..........
dharam:nahi veer chalo chalte hai
sia:dharam vaise tum to aaj sach mein achhe lag rahe ho ek dam cartoon
dharam:aur ye sab is veer ki vajah se
veer:meine thode hi na kaha tha haan karne ko(khud to ladki pe flat hokar haan kar di aur ab hume keh raha hai)
dharam:(he bhagwan khash humne sia ki baat na mani hoti to aaj hume ye saadi to nahi pehnani padti)
sia:dharam kya soch rahe ho
dharam:kuch bhi to nahi..........................chaliye chalte hai

teeno antara ke kamre ki aur jaate hai aur veer antara ke bed ke neech chup jata hai aur darawani aawaz nikalne lagta hai jis se antara ki neend khul jati ahai aur uth kar beth jati hai aur tabhi do auratein safed saadi pehne uski aur aati ahi dono ka chehra unke balo se dhaka hota hai

aurat:chalo antara hum tumhe lene aaye hai
antara:par ...........par tum log.............ho kaun
aurat:tumhari maut
antara:par.............tummmm......hume kyon marana chahti ho
aurat:kyonki tumne humare kamre mein aakar hume pareshan kiya tha
antara:humne kab........
aurat:ab chalo

aur veer neeche betha betha darawani aawaze nikalta rehta jis se mahol kafi darawana ho jata hai

tabhi achanak dharam ko cheenk aa jati hai aur unka khel bigad jata ye dekh kar dharam to bhag jata hai apr veer vahin phans jata hai aur sia bhi vahin ruk jati hai

antara:sia tum ............ tumne ye sab kyon kiya ........... humne to kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki tum aisa karogi
sia:humari baat to sun lo
antara:tumhe pata hai na hume kitna dar lagta hai insab cheezo se phir bhi tumne aisa kiya agar hume kuch ho jata to
veer:par isme sia ki koi galti nahi hai ye sab humne kiya hai
antara:veer par kyon kiya pata hai hum kitna dar gaye the
veer:hume maaf kar do hume pata nahi tha
antara:veer hum tumhe kabhi maaf nahi kar sakte
veer:par antara
antara:veer chale jao yahaan se hum kuch anhi sunana chahte aur haa ab kabhi huse baat karne ki koshish nat karna
sia:antara vo maafi mang raha hai na maaf kar do
antara:sia hume is waqt akela chod do

ciao till my next update



Edited by itemshera - 08 September 2008 at 3:37am
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ClapClapClapAwsome part 6...but wers part 7ConfusedConfused...im lil confusedConfusedConfused as i cnt find it CryCryCry...DVS propa scared Antra...lol dis dharam nah...spoild everifin loool....Hug...cant wait for nxt part...xxxxxxx
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dharam in sadi...omg!!!...aur sia bhi kitni notty hai!!!
good update yaar...keep going....
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oops i wrote it by mistake
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Posted: 25 August 2008 at 2:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by CutieA

ClapClapClapAwsome part 6...but wers part 7ConfusedConfused...im lil confusedConfusedConfused as i cnt find it CryCryCry...DVS propa scared Antra...lol dis dharam nah...spoild everifin loool....Hug...cant wait for nxt part...xxxxxxx


sry i wrote it by mistake 7 instead of 6 i have corrected it
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Originally posted by starpisces123

dharam in sadi...omg!!!...aur sia bhi kitni notty hai!!!
good update yaar...keep going....


thanxxxxxxx n here is my quotaHug

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