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Afsana pyaar ka part 27 pg98 updated (Page 4)

CutieA Senior Member
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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 5:09am | IP Logged
haha...Antra so cheeky! poor Veer...Dharam n Sia...hehe so shweet! plz update sooon xxx
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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 7:21am | IP Logged
 hahaa veer ladkiyon ke baare main sonchraha hai??LOL
antra to bohot badmash haiLOL
veer ke aate hi use satana shuru kardiya.....LOL
aur veer bechara...kahaan kahan nahi gira....LOLLOL
really good update ,its very funnyLOL
pata nahi ab veer iska badla kaise legaLOL,
update it soon yaar waiting 4 itDay Dreaming
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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 3:24pm | IP Logged
oh god antra is soooooo naughty koi baat nahi use veer sudharde ga acha btw it was gr8.
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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 4:32pm | IP Logged
loved the part it was really great update soon
and plz do post a part in the dharamveer fanfic tht everyone in the forum will write together
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Posted: 12 August 2008 at 2:56am | IP Logged
thanxxxxxx frnds for liking will update asap

ok i will write in that toooooo sweetest girl
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Posted: 12 August 2008 at 6:13am | IP Logged
part-4

sia is thinking of dharam and antara enters the room

antara:sia pata tumhe aaj us rajkumar veer ki vajah se hume maa ki daant khani padi humara to man kar raha hai ki hum use maar dale
sia:no reply
antara:hume vo rajkumar veer phooti aankh bhi nahi bhata.......sia sia tum sun rahi ho hum kya keh rahe hai
sia;haan kuch kaha tumne
antara:to hum itni der se uhi bak bak kar rahe hai aur aap he ki kisi ke khayalo mein khoi hui hai
sia:aisa nahi hai achha tum batao ki kya keh rahi thi
antara:kuch bhi nahi....................tum batao kiske khayalo mein khoi hui thi us rajkumar dharam ke
sia:humbhala uske bare mein kyon sochne lage
antara:vo to tum hi jano
sia:chalo ab bahut der ho gayi so jao
subah dharam veer aur unka parivar vapas aryanagar jane ke liye tayar hota hai tabhi sia dharam se milne pahuchti hai
sia:dharam vo humne suna ki tum sab aaj jaa rahe ho kya tum log aur kuch din nahi rook sakte
dharam: nahi pitaji ne kaha he to hume jaana hi parega
sia:dharam:agar hume tumhari yaad aayi to
dharam:to tum humara ye kada dekh lena achaa agar hume tumhari yaad aayi to
sia:to tum humari ye payal le jao aur tum ise dekh lena
sabhi aryanagar vapas lot te hai
aur isi tarah dus saal bit jaate hai aur dharam veer ab 15 saal ke ho chuke hai
aur mahal mein un dono ki bday party ki tayaariyan ho rahi hai
in a room a smart handsome sa ladka kaanch ke samne khada hai aur tayaar ho raha hai he is dharam and then ek cute smart sa ladka aata hai and he is veer
veer:dharam:tum na ladkiyon ki tarah tayar hone mein kitna tym lagate ho sab humari hi galti hai agar vbachpan me hum tumhe rajkumari sia se nahi milvate to shayad aaj tum mein ladkiyon aadat nahi aati
dharam:veer vaise ab ye sia beech mein kahan se aagai
veer:vo humare beech se hati hi kab thi jo phir se beech mein aajaye
dharam;kya kehna chahte ho
veer:sach keh raha hoon humesha to uski payal apne gale se laga kar ghumte rahte ho
dharam:veer chup karo kuch bhi bolte rahte ho
veer:ab vaise rajkumari ji aapka sajna ho gaya ho to chale

CutieA Senior Member
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Posted: 12 August 2008 at 7:15am | IP Logged

awsome part! SnA gona cum to da party? wohoo loool...im hookd! hehe plz update sn! xxx

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Posted: 12 August 2008 at 8:02am | IP Logged
tooo goood
keep going....

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