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Twinkle23

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sure dear no probs n somebody plzzzzz suggest a title for the fanfic

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it was soooo good keep it up yaar and for the title i think you should name it pyar or adventure something like that....
 
 
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okkkkkkkk thanxxxxx for ur suggestion

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Posted: 10 August 2008 at 8:12am | IP Logged

amazing update.... waiting for the next part..... till then

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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 12:17am | IP Logged
hey guys back with my updateTongue

Part-3


next day all of them leaves for awadhi

veer:dharam humne suna hai ki wahaan par do sundar rajkumariyaan hai
dharam:to hum kya kare
veer:agar tumhe unme se koi pasand aayi to
dharam:veer yahi sawal hum tumse bhi pooch sakte hai
veer:mat poocho kyonki ye mera sawal hai tum ise chura nahi sakte

rani:achha theek hai ab yahin bedhe rahoge ya andar bhi chaloge
dharam and veer along with all family memebers enters the palace of awadhi

rani of awadhi:aayiye hum sab aap sabhi ka intzar kar rahe the
veer:vo sab to theek hai par rajkumariyan kahaan hai
dharam:ooooooooooooo
veer:chup ho jao
rani of awadhi:vo dono andar hai jao aap dono vahin chale jao
both of them goes there and suddenly rajkumari sia comes running and collides with dharam and falls.dharam gives his hand to her and just start looking in her eyes on the other side veer enters the room and slips there becoz of oil placed on the floor

antara:LOLLOL............................buddhu dekh kar bhi nahi chal sakte
veer:to ye sab tumne kiya
antara:haan humne kiya kya karoge
veer:hum tumhe maar dalenge
antara:pehle pakad ke to dikhao

veer uske peeche baghta hai use pakad ne ke liye par vo phir se raste mein kanche gira deti hai jis se veer gir jaata hai aur use chot lag jati hai

rani of awadhi:antara ye kya kiya apne agar rajkumar veer ko jayada chot lag jati to
antara:lag jati tab dekh lete par use nahi lagi na to hum jaa rahe hai
rani of awadhi:antara ye kya keh rahi ho janti ho na vo humare mehman hai
antara:par ma isme humari kya galti hai ab hume kya pata tha ki uski aankein nahi hai button hai aur vaise hum jaa rahe hai sia humara intezar kar rahi hai

ciao till my next updateWink

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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 12:24am | IP Logged
lolz it so funny... LOLLOLLOL
Rajkumari antra..ver ver naughty...........LOL
like veer...............Wink
kanche,oil.....kya kya nahi spread kar dali .. LOLLOLWink shaitani dimag ki upaj LOL
n dharam sia...what a first meeting *blush Embarrassed
loved it..
plz do update next part of it asap....


Edited by Rash2cool - 11 August 2008 at 12:25am

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lolzzzzzzz trying sari naughtiness dene me waqt lagata hai but will do asap

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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 12:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by itemshera

lolzzzzzzz trying sari naughtiness dene me waqt lagata hai but will do asap
ok will wait for it Embarrassed

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