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Posted: 15 August 2008 at 5:52pm | IP Logged
wow the story is coming out pretty cool and interesting. Good Job Everyone!!!!
 
k so my part...
As Gunny was leaving in his jeep along with Captain Abhimanyu, he realized that Major General Gaur had told him to convey his message to Rummy.
 
Gunny: I'm sorry Captain, par mujhe ek zaroori kaam yaad agaya hai, main bus atta hoon do minutes me.
 
Abhi: Don't worry Captain, hum aapka yahin intezar karte hain
 
Gunny nodded towards Abhi and got off the jeep. It was Sunday today, so he was sure Rummy would be in his dorm room sleeping, so he decided to go there. To his surprise, Gunny did not find Rummy in his room, he decided he was getting late but will give one last shot in the cafetaria.
 
Cafetaria
 
Akriti: Yeh Vidya shot seh bahar kahan hai, subhe se frame mein dekhi nahi rahi hai
 
Peter: Shahyad woh abhi bhi Captain Randhawa ke saath meeting, woh kya kahtein hain, mulakat kar rahi hogi
 
 

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Super kool!!!
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Akriti-Captain Randhawa ke saath shot?...ab yeh kaisa scene hain??
 
Peter--Romance...what do you call it pyar ka scene hain...kal raat maine un dono ek saath dekha....lights out ke baad....akele...ground ke piche..
 
Purvi--Kya?? peter yeh kaise battein kar rahe hoon tum..
 
Peter-Seriosuly Purvi.....yehi sachh hian....Captain sir aur Vidya ke bich koi khichdi pak rahi hain..
 
Gunny standing at the door clenched his fist....he was really angry.....
 
He entered the cafetaria
 
Captain Randhawa--Cadet Sabnis.....main aapse mein akele mein baat karna chahonga..
 
Peter got full tensed....
 
Peter-Sir woh main..woh actually...
 
Captain--15 minutes in my room...i'll see you there..
 
Peter put his head down.....
 
Peter-Yes sir!!
 
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Abhi--Lekin achanak kya hua?
 
Gunny-Hum aaj nahi jaa sakte......mere informer ne mujhe bas abhi phone kiya...koi hain jo humein iss waqt follow kar raha hain....hum kisi aur din jayengey..its not safe..
 
Abhi--Jaise aap theekh samjhe captain..
 
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Peter-May I come in sir?
 
Gunny gave him a stare...and nodded..
 
Gunny--Dekho Cadet......main yeh sab karna nahi chatha....lekin aap ke liye jo mazak hain woh kisi ke liye bahut badi baat hoo sakti hain...main jaanta hoon aap is baat se nakhush hain ki vidya aapse apni battein nahi share karti lekin army ka ek usool hain cadet....apne saathi par vishwas karo...kabhi kabhi woh majboor hotey hian ....woh aapse chathe huye kuch nahi kehte...appke salamati ke liye!!
 
Peter felt ashamed..
 
PEter-Sorry sir!!
 
Gunny-Main aapse wada karta hoon cadet...waqt anney par main khud aapko sab batonga....tab tak jus believe in me....aur mere liye aur problems create mat karo......aise battein karke aap meri problems bada rahein hain....thekhe meri parwa na karo.....lekin vidya...aggar meri problem badti hain toh vidya ke double badti hian....please co-operate with us cadet...
 
Peter-I am sorry sir...aap jaisa kahengey main waisa karonga...
 
Gunny-Thankyou and dismiss..
 
Peter turned to go
 
Gunny-Ahhh cadet ....woh cade saxena kahan hain??
 
Peter-Pata nahi sir....woh subah se nahi dekhi.......woh kahinn bahar gayyi hain..
 
Gunny-KAhan??
 
Peter-Pata nahi sir..
 
Gunny--Ksii se toh kaha hoga...kisi se permission liye bagair bahar gayyi hiain??
 
Peter-Pata nahi sir..shayad maj sharma ko bata kar gayyi hogi...ya phir aise hi chali gayyi hogi...
 
And peter left..
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Gunny found out from maj.sharma that vidnoe to the temple..
 
gunny-Major woh Cadet Vidya saxena academy se gayab hain!!
 
Major--NAhi captain...woh mujhse permisiion lekar mandir hain..
 
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Gunny drove as fast as possible to the temple...
 
As he entered the temple he looked for her....he finally saw her weeping in one corner....she looked sad and exhausted!!
 
 

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Posted: 16 August 2008 at 8:15am | IP Logged
A great update Sameera , Tina and princessuma. Keep it up. Heres my part.
 
Gunny was happy to see her safe and sound. When Maj.Vaibhavi had informed him that Vidya had gone to the town alone a cold fear had gripped his heart.  The last time when he went to meet an informer he had been attacked and threathened that Vidya would be harmed. Yesterday Vidya herself had told that she was being threathened .Inspite of that she had gone to town alone.  Anything could happen. The drive from KMA to the temple was the longest drive and Gunny who in his whole life never prayed had prayed to God to keep Vidya safe.
 
Before Gunny could take a step forward he saw some guys dressed shabbily approach Vidya...


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Gunny ran towards Vidya as fast as he could, though not calling out to her in fear. To Gunny's surprise, it didn't matter how fast he ran, the guys kept on walking towards Vidya but for some reason they didn't reach her. The next thing Gunny heard was somebody calling out to him.

Somebody: Sir, are you alright?? What are you doing here?
 
Gunny suddenly felt that he wasn't running anymore, in desperation he looked around himself only to be confronted by the one he was running for.
 
Vidya: Captain Randhawa, are you alright?? Aap itna sweat kyun karrahe hain?
 
Gunny kept staring at Vidya with a disbelief experession, resulting in Vidya violently shaking Gunny to come back to his senses.

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Posted: 17 August 2008 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Super kool.!!.......i m postin de next part..
 
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Gunny-Ahh ...woh vidya tum theekh toh ho na..
 
He placed his hands on her shoulders and asked with real concern in his voice...
 
Vidya--Jee sir...vidya theekh hain lekin aap ko kya hua...itney pareshaan kyun dikh rahe hain..
 
Gunny-Pareshann...obviously tum academy se akeli kyun nikli??.....batao mujhe...aggar tumhe kuch ho jata toh...tumhe kya itni akal bhi nahi.....kyun ayi thi yahan...kisne kaha tha......ek baar mujhse keh diya hota..
 
Gunny was literally screaming...
 
Vidya-Sir aapko vidya ki itni fikar kyun hain??
 
Gunny was shocked....first this girl comes away like that and then she ufff..
 
Gunny-Ahh aap meri cadet hian..main aapka teacher hooon...
 
Vidya-Academy se sunday ko kitney sarrey loog permission lekar bahar nikaltey hain....kya aapko unkey barrey main bhi itni hi fikar hoti hain??
 
Gunny- Vidya tum
 
Vidya-Nahi sir...Aap vidya ki itni fikar naih kijiye sir....vidya apna khayal rakh sakti hain......
 
Gunny was surprised...was this the same girl he was talking to last night...
 
Gunny--Vidya tum janti hoon main tumhari fikar karta hoon....phir aisa behave kyun kar rahi hoon..
 
Vidya--Sir main aapse kuch puchoon....aaj kal aap cadet saxena se nikal kar har baar vidya bulatey hain.....phir meri itni fikar....yeh sab .....pata nahi sir.....yeh sab ajeeb lag raha hain.......
 
Vidya silently walked off..
 
Gunny was left surprised....what the hell was happening??..
 
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He sat in the jeep and they drove down back to the academy...
 
Gunny--Kya tumhe mere tumhe vidya bulana se koi problem hain...woh toh tuhe kal raat comfortable feel karaney ke liye....i m sorry....
 
Vidya was silent..
 
Gunny-Please mujhe batao......iss chupi ka kya matlab nikaloon main??
 
Vidya-Main aapse kaise kahoon sir..
 
Gunny-Please mujhe batao...jo bhi hain main sun ne ke liye tayyar hoon....
 
Vidya-Sach kahoon sir...
 
There was silence...
 
Vidya-Shayad yeh aapko samjh main na ayye...meri bewakoffi lagey...lekin sir main kya karoon.....jab bhi aap mujhe vidya bulateyy hain toh mujhe lagta ki vansh mujhe bulata hain....mera mann janta hain ki aap vansh nahi hain...lekin mera dil...main toh usse samjha bhi nahi sakti..........woh bas aapki ki taraf khincha jata hain...
 
A tear rolled out her face...
 
Vidya-Jab bhi aap cadet saxena kehte hain toh uss duri ka ehsaas hota hain...ehsaas hota hain mere dil ko ki aap koi aur hain....bas main khud apney dil ko kaboo main nahi rakh pa rahi sir...
 
Vidya was crying...
 
Vidya-Lekin sir vidya kamzoor nahi hain......main ladongi....apney vansh ke liye ladongi..bas mujhe thoda waqt lagega...
 
Gunny wished he hadnt taken out the topic..
 
Gunny-I am sorry.....i m really sorry cadet...
 
Vidya felt the pain in his voice..
 
Vidya-Sir aisa nahi hain ki mujhe vansh ko yaad nahi karna....vansh meri harr sanns main basa hua hain....bas aggar vansh ko yaad karti hoon aur woh mere samne hain toh usse durr rehna bahut mushkil hain.....
 
Gunny nodded..
 
Vidya-Aap vidya ko please galat mat samjhiyega...main pata nahi aapko kaisey samjhaoon..
 
Gunny-Its ok cadet...i understand....
 
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Gunny decided he had to do something fast.........things were going out of grip.......
 
While vidya was trying to figure out why was gunny so concerned for her....jus because she was his brothers fianceee....or did he feel someting for her....perhaps it was out of pure respect....or...
 
Vidya dint want to complete that thought...it would become impossible for her to finish her trainign at the academy if she started thinking all this....she had to focus!!.....why the helll had she gone out of focus....
 
She wondered!!
 

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Vidya walked into her dorm room still looking dazed, which the other two girl cadets clearly took notice too.
 
Akriti: Vidya, tum is scene itni out of focus kyun lag rahi ho. Kisi nay tumhara koi shot kharab kardiya kya
 
For some reason, Vidya knew that Akriti was clearly refering to yesterday's event with Gunny and Peter. Vidya got really pissed off, she was tired of all this. Why couldn't people just accept that she felt comfortable talking to Gunny? Did she really had to spell out everything to everyone? But, she wondered why DID she felt so comfortable with Gunny? Before she could wonder any further though, Purvi interepted her thought.
 
Purvi: Vidya, tum theek toh ho na? Kya hoya? Tum itni khoyi khoyi si kyun lag rahi ho?
 
Vidya: Vidya theek hai bus woh thori dher akele rahna chahti hai. Please leave me alone!!
 
Akriti and Purvi were shocked to see this angry side of Vidya and not wanting to further provoke her, they quietly left the room. As they got out of their room, they suddenly heard a crash. They quickly ran into their room, only to be confronted by...

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Akriti and Purvi got a shock of their life when they entered the dorm room.  Vidya was lying flat on the floor holding her shoulder and moaning in pain. Blood was freely flowing out of a wound on her shoulder ,soaking her white color salwar. Someone had aimed and shot at her through the open window. She fell down when the bullet hit her pulling a glass lying on one of the tables causing the sound which  had alerted Akriti & Purvi.

 

Both of them rushed to help Vidya. Purvi immediately broke the glass on the alarm placed in the room.  The alarm rang throughout KMA ...

 
 


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In no time one could see all the people running around...Major sharma came there and enquired about what happened??

Purvi--Ma'am bahar se kis ne vidya par goli chala di hain ma'am
 
MAjor-What bahar se?...are you sure cadet?
 
Purvi-Yes ma'am...
 
Major sharma ran to the window there was no sign of anyone ...
 
Major-App isse waqt Cadet Saxena ko infirmary le jaoo....main bakki dekhti hoon..
 
Major sharma ran out of the academy...trying to spot the person...meanwhile all the exit gates were blocked........
 
When Gunny heard about this incident he ran to the infirmary...
 
He saw all the cadets standing and discussing...he dint care...he barged into the infirmary....
 
But well his timing was wrong.....Shalini was heading to vidya's wounds  on her shoulder.....her top a bit of place.....
 
Gunny was embarrased he looked away...
 
Shalini-Captain.....please step out...main aapse baad main baat karti hoon...
 
Gunny went outside the infirmary......
 
He stood in another corner...
 
He saw all the cadets looking at him...
 
He dint say anything...he jus prayed that vidya should be fine...
 
He walked up and down.....tension all over his face...
 
45 minutes later shalini came out...
 
Shalini-I have bandaged her wounds but shes still very weak....well shes very lucky....the bullet has touched and left her body......otherwise it could have been something major...right now shes better.....you guys can meet her....but remeber she needs rest...so make it fast...
 
As the cadets made their way in....gunny remained standing there....happy that she was fine..
 
Shalini-Captain shes fine....dont worry
 
Gunny nodded...
 
Shalini thought it was best not to say anything and she left.......
 
15 minutes later the cadets left.......they had their drill...
 
Gunny entered the room....
 
Vidya saw him coming in.....
 
She first looked down....and then straight into his eyes..
 
Gunny sat on a stool beside her...
 
Gunny-Kaisi hoon?
 
Vidya--Theekh hoon sir....
 
There was silence...
 
Vidya-Sir vidya aapse maafi mangna chathi hian..
 
Gunny-Kis baat ke liye??
 
Vidya-Vidya ne jeep main jo kuch bhi kaha....shayad kuch zyada hogaya...mujhe aisa nahi kehna chahiye tha.....sorry sir...
 
Gunny-No cadet its alright....i understand..
 
Vidya-Thankyou sir..
 
Gunny-Ab acha hoga aggar aap mujhe jald se jald sab bata de......aaj aap par chota hamla hua hain...kal ko kuch bada hoga toh......please.......abb yeh loog toh KMA bhi pahunch gayye.....tum bas jald se jald theekh ho jao...phir sarri battein karengey...main bhi tumhe sab bataunga.....
 
Vidya nodded...she was proud of him...he remembered his promise...
 
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