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Kavi1982

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Posted: 14 August 2008 at 8:11am | IP Logged
That was a really nice update. A nice twist. Vansh and Gunny  twins. Gr8! Hmm now Vidya has to pacify Peter let's see what happens.

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Posted: 14 August 2008 at 10:46am | IP Logged
thnx sameera.....i am tina....you cld call me tina!!.......hey darwin...you could hv posted de next part na!!

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Posted: 14 August 2008 at 11:02am | IP Logged
hey tina...awesome update!!  finally gunny  called  vidya by her name....

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Posted: 14 August 2008 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Hey Tina went out and came back just now. Will update tomm. U can call me Vijaya. Take Care guys.

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Posted: 14 August 2008 at 8:08pm | IP Logged
k here me go lol
 
Though Vidya was glad to coming closer to solve Vansh's murder mystery, she was still worried about Gunny. She was a little distraught with Gunny ending their meeting but maybe he was right, she had to go talk to Peter first.
 
For the first time in her life, Vidya sneaked into the boys dormitory.
 
Vidya thinking: Vidya really shouldn't be here, lekin Peter seh abhi baat karni bhi zaroori hai. Ab lekin main usse kahan dhoondo.
 
As Vidya was walking...

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Posted: 15 August 2008 at 3:35am | IP Logged

thnx sanyogita........alrty vijaya...

And nice part ........

 

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Posted: 15 August 2008 at 5:23am | IP Logged

Guyz gr8 goin Especially princesssuma, Tina n Vijaya

 

Now heres my part

 

Vidya heard someone speaking.. It was Peter......

He was speaking abt her.

Peter- Maine Vidya ko Capt. Randhawa ke saath dekha....

Rummy- To Boss isme kaunsi badi baat hai. Hum sab log ek dusre ke saath dikhayi dete hai. Malla Akriti ke saath, Akriti Capt. Abhimanyu ke saath, Capt. Abhimanyu SD ke saath, SD.......

Malla- Aap phir se shuru ho gaye Rummy bhaiya......

Peter- Arre dude par maine abhi abhi Vidya aur Capt Randhawa ko saath dekha... Shayad koi meeting chal rahi thi dono ke beech.. Peter was laughing as he said it..

Malla- Tumhe sharam nahi aati Vidyaji ke baare nein aisi baat karte hua. Agar unhe pata chal gaya to unhe kitna bura lagega.....

Peter-Arre maine aisa kya wrong what you call it galat kaha.. Jo dekha wahi kaha.. Aisi kaunsi baat hai jo humse nahi kar sakti Vidya. Kya hum uske friends what you call it dost nahi hai....

Malla- Unki koi majboori hogi.......

Peter- Aisi kaunsi majboori hai jo sirf Capt. Randhawa se hi kehkar solve hoga

Rummy-Boss agar tumhe yeh sab jaana hai to Vidya ko hi jaakar pooch lo. Par ab so jaao please....

Vidya was stunned after what she heard.. She alwayz felt tht Rummy was tht way but today she had seen a new side of Peter

She felt like cryin.. Her eyes filled up... Vidya came running towards her room. The only thing she didnt know tht Capt. Randhawa had seen her cryin... He didnt know  what was the problem now..............

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Posted: 15 August 2008 at 9:32am | IP Logged

Heres my update. Hope you guys like it. Must say the story is shaping well .

The next day Vidya decided to go to a temple in the town. With the threats, the relevation that  Vansh & Gunny were brothers & the  talk that she heard in the boys hostel Vidya was really disturbed. The only place where she could get peace was a temple. Since it was a Sunday she could go. She took the neccessary permission from Maj.Sharma and left early in the morning before the other cadets woke up. She didnot feel like meeting any of her friends that day. She was really upset. 
 
Gunny had got a call from his informer to meet him the previous night. He decided to take Abhimanyu with him. With Gehlot free he didnot want to take any chance of going out alone. They already had enough of problems with eagle.  The last time when he stepped out of academy he was attacked and was unable to meet his informer. He didnot want a repeat of it. Going out alone would be stupidity. He was was not aware that Vidya had gone to the town alone.


Edited by Darwin - 16 August 2008 at 8:16am

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