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Vidya returned to her room in a complete daze, she knew that she shouldn't have lied but she had to for Captain Randhawa's sake. As she was about to go and freshen up an orderly came in.
 
Orderly: Cadet Saxena, aap kay liye yeh letter aya hai
 
Vidya silently took the letter from him and nodded in thanks. As soon as the Orderly left, Vidya sat on her bed, staring at the envelope.

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AWesome work guys!!...
 
Heres my bit for today!!
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She dint knoe what to do...there was yet another letter from them.....this time it had Captain Randhawa's picture and red spots all over........they will kill him if she doesnt do what they say..
 
She couldnt let him die...nor could she do what they wanted....how could she betray her own country...no she couldnt!!..
 
She couldnt see any option left....she thought....the only option was taking Captain Randhawa into confidence...but that was her last choice....she tried to work out some other plan..
 
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Meanwhile Gunny knew that Vidya was lying...he knew she was in trouble...and he knew it was something about his life...he remebered how during the punishment she even stole the file to save his life.....perhaps yet again someone blackmailed her and threatened her to kill him...
 
While gunny was thinking all this Abhimanyu came there...
 
Abhi-Captain woh...
 
And gunny dint respond....he was lost in thought..
 
Abhi-Captain....
 
No response
 
Abhi-Captain...(he snapped his fingers in front of him)
 
Gunny-Ahh uh haan captain..
 
Abhi-Kahan kho gayye the?...koi problem..
 
Gunny-Ahh nahi captain...aap bataye..
 
Abhi sat down..
 
Abhi-Dekhiye Captain....main janta hoon ki aapke aur Cadet Vidya saxena ke bich kuch battein chal rahi hain...aap bahut pareshaan lag rahe hain...aap mujhse share kar sakte hain..
 
Gunny-Captain woh..(pause).chodiye na...S.D par koi nayyi khabar??
 
Gunny tried to change the topic!!
 
Abhi-Topic change karne ki koshish kar rahe hain...alright captain...
 
Gunny dint say anything..
 
Abhi-Kya hum kuch puchein?
 
Gunny-Haan
 
Abhi-Kya aap Cadet Vidya saxena ko pehle se jantein hain....ya kya uska humare mission se koi lena dena hain??
 
Gunny looked at abhimanyu in shock..
 
Abhi-Aise mat dekhiye captain...humein bas laga ki Cadet Saxena ka kuch toh lena dena hain EAGLE ke pure case se ya phir aapki nichi zindagi se...hum aapse aapki nichi zindagi ke barrein mein kuch nahi puchengey captain.....bas ek professional sawal.....aggar humein EAGLE ko dhundhna hain toh kya Cadet saxena humarey raste main aayengi??
 
Gunny dint knoe what to say..he was just in state of shock...
 
Abhi-Batayi captain?..
 
gunny-Main nahi janta Captain....I really dunno..
 
Gunny got up and stood in one corner of the room......completely tensed.......his hand on his head!!
 
Abhi-Hum chaltein hain Captain...aap aaram kijiye!!
 
And abhimanyu left!!...
 
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The next morning...gunny was to take the drill for the First years!.
 
Vidya was just not attentive in class..
 
Her mind was wandering...and gunny noticed this...he just wished she opened up...but she dint!!.......He jus sighed thinking where was all this gonna go...and how would he solve this whole problem!!
 
 

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He ordered the cadets to take four rounds and asked Vidya to stay back. Vidya looked at him in shock and just stood her ground looking down.
 
Gunny: Cadet Saxena, main jaanta hoon keh aap mujshe seh apni problems share nahin karna chahti hain. But that doesn't mean Cadet, keh aap class mein attentive nahin rahin gi. Am I clear? (Vidya looked up and nodded in response). Now Cadet, aap ki yeh saaza hai ki aap chaar ki bajaaye cheh rounds lagayengi. Alright? Any questions, Cadet?
 
Vidya looked at him, still debating in her mind if she should tell him or not. Deciding it was best if she took him into confidence.
 
Vidya: Vidya aap ko sab kuch sach sach batana chahti hai.
 
Gunny looked at Vidya with a suprised look

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awesome story!

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Her"s My next part!

 
Capt Randhawa: Alright Cadet. Lekin aapko apne 6 rounds complete karne honge . Sharp 12:00 hrs ko aap mere office mein aa sakti hain. Any questions?
 
Vidya: NO Sir.
 
Vidya goes to complete her punishment.

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too gud!!...luv de way de stry is shapin up!!

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Vidya stood outside his door....her hands trembling...
 
She was about to knock when the door opened...she was startled....It was abhimanyu..
 
Abhi-Cadet Saxena aap?
 
Vidya-Jee sir woh actually main Captain Randhawa se..i mean unhone mujhe yahan report karney ko kaha hain..
 
Abhi-Alright cadet...
 
And abhimanyu leaves...once again noticing gunny and vidya..
 
Vidya entered....
 
Gunny saw her..
 
Gunny-Aao Cadet...
 
Gunny noticed the fear and uncomfortablness in her....
 
Gunny-Kya baat hain cadet aur koi problem...
 
Vidya-Sir woh kya hum ....kya hum yeh baat...yeh baat....
 
She was stammering..
 
Gunny-Cadet please relax....aaram se baithiyein aur baat kijiye..
 
Vidya-Sir...aggar hum yeh baatein raat ko lights out ke baad karein toh??
 
Gunny looked at her in shock.....where do you get to see a  cadet telling her teacher openly to break the rules!!LOL
 
But gunny knew that there would be a reason..
 
Gunnny-Kya main jaan sakta hoon iski wajah?
 
Vidya-SIr woh bas vidya ne aise hi keh diya...
 
Gunny looked at her....
 
Gunny-Tumhe yeh sab bahut hi oficial lag raha hain na....yeh uniform yeh kamra...evrything...main samjhta hoon...
 
Gunny smiled...Smile
 
Gunny-Lights out ke baad miltein hain.....it would be a bit informal....chalega na??
 
Vidya-Thankyou sir!.
 
Gunny smiled...
 
Gunny-Army main kabhi kabhi ek officer aisa ajeeb sa mehsoos karta hain...main samjtha hoon...vansh ki bhi yahinn aadat th...
 
And gunny stopped abruptly.Dead..Vidya looked at him...Her eyes filled up....
 
Gunny-I am sorry...woh mera irada yeh sab kehna ka nahi tha...galti se...i m sorry cadet!!..
 
Vidya-Nahi sir....Main theekh hoon.....vansh ko bhi yahin lagta tha...vansh ne bataya tha ki kabhi kabhi mahool itna serious lagta hain ki humein wahan se bhag janey ka maan karta hain...
 
Gunny looked at her...there was a smile on her face speaking about vansh...but there were a thousand signs of sadness....she so really missed him..
 
Vidya-Sir Vidya ki 2 shartein hain!
 
Gunny-Shartein??
 
Vidya-Pehli mere aapko ab kuch batne ke baad aap koi bhi action bina mujhe kahe nahi lengey..
 
Gunny looked at her with a smile..
 
Gunny-Well senior officer kaun hain??Cool
 
Vidya-Aap hain sir...lekin iss baat main aapki jaan ko khatra hain...aur vidya nahi chathi ki aapko kuch ho jayye....
 
Gunny-Aur aisa kyun?
 
Vidya-Kyunki aap ek bahut bahadur sipahi hain....aur aapko khona iss desh ka sabse bada nuksaan hoga....infact sab ka nuksaan hoga...desh ka...Kma mein ka....sareyy faculty ka....sabka bahut bada nuksaan hoga..
 
Gunny-Aur tumhara??
 
Gunny dint know why he said that......maann words were slipping today...
 
Vidya looked at him...
 
Vidya---Vidya ke aatma ka nuksaan hoga....vansh ke janeyy par vidya ki zindagi ka sabse bada nuksaan hua...phir KMA mein aap mile.....ek jeeney ki wajah mili.....aap ko pasand ho na ho..aapko dekhney par vidya ko ek sukoon milta hain...aisa lagta hain ki vansh mere saath hain....hala ki aggar vansh hota to halat alag hotein..lekin...phir bhi...aap toh bas
 
And vidya couldnt say anything...her voice choked!!..
 
Gunny couldnt do anything.....he jus tried to console her...
 
Gunny-Cadet shant ho jao....its ok..i m sorry...aap meri wajah se..
 
Vidya-Its ok sir......vidya ke pehli shart toh aapney sun li aur ab vidya ke  dusri shart.....
 
Vidya looked serious...
 
Vidya-Aggar aap sab kuch jan na chahte hain aur vidya ke maddad karna chathein hian toh aap vidya ko Vansh ke mauth ke barrein main sari sachai bataeingey...aapka kya rishta hain vansh se??
 
Gunny looked up at her in shock..
 
Gunny-Main vansh
 
Vidya intrputed--Yeh mat kahiye ga sir ki aap vansh ke baarein main kuch nahi jantein.....aap vansh ke baarein main bahut kuch jantein hain......
 
sir woh jungle wala aadmi mujhse wada karke mukad sakta hain......jin loggon se meri battein pichle kuch dinnon se ho rahi hain...woh bhi wada karke todh sakte hain....
 
koi bhi mujhe vansh ke mauth ke baarein main nahi batayega...lekin sir vidya ko aap par pura bharosa hain.....aap vidya ko dhoka nahi dengey....aap mujhe vansh ki mauth ke arrey main sab batiye aur main aapko sab batongi....mujhe aapki maddad chahiye sir...
 
Gunny looked at Vidya.....completely shocked....this was a sweet and emotional way of blackmail!!............
 
Vidya-Raat ko vidya aap ka intezar karegi sir....ground ke pichey...
 
And vidya left..
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Vidya knew he would come...but still somewhere she worried what if he dint come...
 
She waited for him......she sat  on a bench...
 
HE came there....looking tooo kool....in a simple pair of jeans and t-shirt also he looked smashing....
 
She preffered to stick to some casuals too..
 
He sat beside her on the bench...
 
Vidya-Vidya janti thi sir ki aap zaroor ayengey..
 
Gunny-Call me Gunny...
 
Vidya was surprised...
 
Gunny-Well duty hours nahi hian....aur waisey bhi tum toh yahin chathi thi na...ek informal meeting ........hain na Vidya??Wink
 
HE stressed on vidya...
 
Vidya-Haan sir..i mean gunny..
 
She had never called him gunny before...nor in her thoughts she reffered to him as gunny.....it felt nice to her..
 
Vidya-Toh kya aap vidya ko vansh ke mauth ke barrey main batayengey....
 
Gunny-Tumne aur koi raasta nahi choda....aur main tumhe kisi musibaat main akela nahi chodh sakta vidya....iss liye if it means sharing some restricted information also i dont mind...kyunki mera yakiin hian ki tum yeh sabb kisi ko nahi bataogi...tum par main bahut vishwas karta hoon vidya...
 
Vidya-Aap vidya par bharosa kar saktey hain...
 
Gunny-Jo main abb tumse kehna jaa raha hoon...woh sab jo mere andar dabba hua hain...woh maine aaj tak kisi se kabhi nahi kaha....aaj halaat aise hain ki main tumhe bata raha hoon...
 
 
Gunny took a deep breeath and began
 
Gunny-Vansh Pradhan....woh aadmi jiskey barrey main tum sab jan na chathi hoon uske barrein main mujhe infact mein bahut kuch janta hoon...kyunki VANSH MERA JUDWA BHAI THA
 
Vidya was taken in for a shock!!
 
VIdya-Vansh aapka judwa bhai??
 
Gunny-Haan....Jab mera aur vansh ka janam hua tha papa nahi the....humarey paida hooney ki 4 mahiney pehle mummy -papa ka jhagda hua...aur papa ghar chodh kar chale gayye......unhone kisi aur se shadi kar li.......
 
meri ek mausi thi .....maa ne kabhi socha hi nahi tha ki yeh sab hoga...aisa main unkey judwa ho gayyee....ek bachee ka palan-poshan hi mushkil tha......do bachoon ka toh sawal hi nahi uth ta.....isliyee meri mausi ney ek bacha apna liya...
 
aur woh bacha vansh tha....vansh ke naam se unka naam judd gaya....maa ne faisla liya ki woh mausi ji aur unkey bete se hamesha durr ho jayegi....
 
Woh humesha apney aap ko gunahgar manti hain....apney hi ek bachee ko woh chodh ayye....isliyee mein aur maa bahut durr chale gayye......phir main bada hua aur army join ki.....itefakk samjho yaa takdeer.......main wahan jaa kar vansh se mila...maa ne ek baar bataya tha mere judwa bhai ke barrey main...aur unhoneey kabhi bhi usee dhundne se mana kiya....kyunki woh kabhi bhi uss bachee ko apna mooh nahi dikhana chathi thi.....lekin main mila....main mila vansh se......apneyy bhai se..apney khoon se...
 
Gunny's eyes filled up.....he was brigning back all those old memories...and he found it to tought to control himself.......
 
Gunny-Unn saloon main mumma aur mausa jii ke bich kuch problems bhi the....bas samjho sab kuch bhikar gaya tha.....main aur vansh sirf 4 ya 5 baar mile hongey uski mauth ke kuch din pehle.......chup chup kar.....bina mere maa ya mausa aur mausi ko kahabar kiye...apney hi bhai....apney hi khoon se chup chup kar milta!!...lekin jinti bhi din saath the.....ek disre ke barrey main bahut kuch jaan gayye.....ek dusre main apna woh khoya hua bhai nazar anney laga.....
 
A tear flowed down gunny's eyes....vidya noticed that...
 
She felt bad for having done all that to him.......
 
Vidya-I m sorry...yeh sab meri wajah se..
 
Gunny-No vidya...its ok...tumhe jan ne ka haq hain...akhir tum Vansh se pyar karti THI....
 
Vidya-Karti hoon ....aaj bhi vansh se pyaar karti hoon...hala ki mere pyar ko samjhney wala aur uss pyar ko wapas dene walaa iss duniya main hi nahi hain.....lekin pyar humesha wapas paney ki liye nahi kiya jatta sir....bas kiya jata hain....pyar ek pagalpan hian.....jo ek baar ho jayee bas ho jatta hain.
 
Gunny saw a tear in her eyes too...
 
He placed his hand over her's trying to show a consoling gesture..
 
Vidya was taken for a surprise by that gesture...she looked down at his hands....she so felt vansh's touch....she wished to hug him right there....but she knew she couldnt.....her heart kept thinking that was her vansh....but her mind knew that it was jus a game of destiny....that they were twins!!...
 
She was strugglin with her emotions....gunny noticed this...he knew it was tough for her....he immediately removed that hand....
 
He looked away......well wasnt this meeting going way too informal....Wink
 
 
Vidya--Main nahi jaanti thi ki vansh ke barrey main pata laga ne main aapko itni takleff sahni hogi...sorry sir..
 
Gunny-ITs ok Cadet...
 
There you go...both back to being formal..
 
Vidya-Sir..aap toh samjhtein hain na main yeh sab kyun puch rahi hoon....main vansh se pyar karti hoon sir....uske barrein main jan na meri zindagi ka makzat hain....
 
Gunny nodded.
 
Vidya-Kya apney kabhi bhi kisi se pyar kiya..??
 
Gunny looked up suprised...now he wasnt expecting that..
 
 
Just then there was a rustling of bushes....there was somebody listening to them......gunny got on his guard...
 
Gunny-Out from there now....hands up..
 
Slowly a  shadow emerged
 
Vidya was shocked..
 
Vidya-Peter tum............
 
Peter--Woh actually Vidya main woh night walk what do you call it Raat ki sair leney gaya tha...aur yahan ayya toh dekha ki tumhara toh sir ke saath item chal raha hain...toh woh dusre rastey se niklney ki koshish kar raha tha......par woh bhi flop..I sware maine aap logon ki koi baat nahi suni...main toh chup-chap dusre raastey se nikal raha tha..
 
Gunny-Cadet Peter sabnis....Aap yahan se kyun guzar nahi saktey the......Aap yahan se bhi jaa sakte the...
 
Peter looked down..
 
Peter-Woh sir Vidya ko thoda odd lagta .....issliye maine...
 
ANd he left the rest incomplete..
 
Gunny-abb aap jaa saktein hain Cadet....(he turned to vidya) aap bhi jaa sakti hian..
 
Peter-NAhi sir...aap please baat kee jiye...waise bhi aaj kal vidya kisi se baat kahan karti hian...apni hi duniya mainkhoyi rahti hain...aggar woh apna problem aapse share kar rahi hain toh aap please uski baat sun lee jiye...shayad woh humein iss layak hi nahi samjhti..Ouch
 
There was a sense of taunt in his last statement..
 
Vidya-Tum aise kyun keh rahe hoon peter.....vidya toh bas yuhin
 
Peter-Rehne doon vidya...main chalta hoon..
 
And peter left..
 
Gunny-Appko Cadet Sabnis se baat krani chahiye....aap sab kee saath normal behave kee jiye....aur mere khyala se aaj ki liye intna kaffi hain...atleast humne shuruwat ki...bakki ki battein kal bhi toh ho sakti hian...i hope you dont mind...
 
Vidya-No sir.
 
Gunny-Goodnight then cadet....aur haan Cadet Sabnis ko mana lena!!....
 
And gunny left....Vidya was little worried she was closee to the mystery yet so far....but she was glad that there was a start!....she was going to solve this mystery soon!!!!!!
  
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Edited by cool~~gal - 14 August 2008 at 6:41am

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oh man...thats was de longest so far....i was just typin and kept on typin...lol!!....welll hope u guys dunt mind...let me noe whether you lykd de way de stry is shapin uppp coz i m lovin it!!!.....

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