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sanyogita_a

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Posted: 05 October 2008 at 1:56am | IP Logged
abhi came out of gunny's room...after all the conversation he had wid gunny he became concerned about gunny...wats wrong wid capt randhava he thaught...why capt was so disturbed? being gunny's frd abhi was worried for him...though gunny was denying , abhi knew dat he(gunny) had feelings for vidya...dats why he wasnt ready to send her for mission....
wats wid shikha...her behaviour was  very weird...
 
abhi : mujhe shikha par najar rakhni hogi...
n then.....

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Abhi was thinking about the whole thing when he heard Gunny calling him. Abhi turned behind to see Gunny coming out of his room walking towards him.  He saw Vidya leaving Gunny?s office. Gunny caught up with him.

 

Gunny: Humein MGG ko inform karna hoga aur phir unke permission se strategies plan karna hoga.

 

Abhi nodded his head.

 

Gunny: Captain aap ne humse kyon puchha ki Shikha innocent hain ki nahi? Aapko doubt kyon hua.

 

Abhi:  Actually kal dophar ko hum aapke office mein kuch files wapas rakne gaya the , waha humne Shikha ko aapke office mein dekha. Aap nahin the. Aisa lag raha tha ki woh humare aane se pehle kuch kar rahin thi aur jaise hum enter huye woh chup chap kadhi ho gayi. Uske baad hum HQ gaye the aur late wapas aaye to isiliye humi aapse baat nahin kar payee. Jab mein wapas aa raha tha humne Shikha ko point 1857 ki taraf se wapas aate dekha. Itni raat gaye woh point 1857 aakeli kyun gayi? Unki jaan ko khatara hain isiliye to woh yahan hai. Akela jaane ka matlab.

 

Oh God! Iska matlab kal raat ko Shikha ne mujhe aur Vidya ko point 1857 pe dekha.  Woh hamara picha kar rahi thi.

 



Edited by Darwin - 05 October 2008 at 4:28am

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Guys gr8 updates..... Thumbs UpVijaya, Amruta n Tina gr8 work..ClapClapLuved the UDsSmile
 
 
 
Gunny didnt know how Shikha came there..It was damn difficult for someone to go up there alone n risky too n a girl like Shikha had gone there alone...Was there someone else wid her too...This girl was here in KMA bec there was a threat to her life n she is roaming around alone..Gunny dint know wht was happening...What was Shikha upto???? What had she seen out there?? Now he was sure there was something tht he didnt know abt Shikha.....But wht was it??? Why was Shikha gettin so mysterious??
 
Abhi was not able to know wht was goin on Shikha wanted to likk Vidya but why?? Abhi felt he knew the answer to this but his heart didnt want to accept it...HE alwys knew wht Vidya n Gunny shared bet each other but he still didnt wanna accept it n now he had come to know tht Vansh was Gunnys bro n Vidya was goin to marry Vansh..Then it striked him tht Gunny had said JUDWA so tht meant they were identical twins....Oh God!!! Abhi felt what was goin on??
 
Gunny was more worried for Vidya than anything else..HE ddint care what Shikha saw or wht she felt abt him..He had told her tht there was nothing for her in his life but this girl but she didnt want to understand...He decided to speak abt it to her..He wanted to know abt it...
Gunny started walkin towards Shikhas room ..He wanted answers to his numerous questions n he knew only Shikha wud answer tht no one else.
 
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Edited by sweetdreams4040 - 07 October 2008 at 3:24am

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hey sam....as usual fabulous update!!

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Thnks a lot Amruta. So sweet of you dearSmile

 

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As Gunny was goin towards Shikhas room he saw tht Abhi was coming tht way..

Abhi-Capt. Aap kahan jaa rahe hain. MGG ne urgent meeting bulayi hai.. Hum vahin jaa rahe hai.. Aap bhi chaliye..

Gunny-Chaliye..

There was no way to skip this Gunny felt.. There was something or the other coming in his way of knowing the truth.. He left with Abhi

MGG had called the meeting to discuss abt the new strategy to trap EAGLE..

The meeting was a long one. Gunny kept thinking abt Vidya n the scene of Shikha holding the gun at Vidya hadnt left Gunnys mind. . He was just thinking abt it

The meeting was over. But MGGs experienced eyes had come to know tht there was something wrong with Gunny..

MGG-Theekh hai.. The meeting is over..Ab aap jaa sakte hai..

Everyone was leaving tht MGG called out to Gunny..

MGG-Capt Randhawa.. One minute Can I have a word with you??

Gunny-Yes Sir

MGG came near Gunny

MGG-Capt. Aap theekh hai.. Koi dikkat to nahin..?

Gunny-Dikkat nahin.. Aur aap kyun pooch rahe hain Sir.Aapko kisike dikkat se kyaa lena dena hain.

Gunny was sarcastic.He himself didnt know the reason why he was being so rude to MGG.He knew he had to keep a control over himself.. He recovered

Gunny-Sorry Sir.. Koi dikkat nahin hai.. Im fine.Thanks for the concern.. Ab main chalta hoon..

MGG knew something was terribly wrong.. Gunny had reacted very badly.MGG felt he was the reason to it which was very untrue..

The first thing Gunny did after coming out of MGGs cabin was he went to check out on Shikha.. He wanted answers to his numerous questions.

As Gunny reached the room he saw the room locked.. Where had Shikha gone??

Gunny was clueless.. What the hell was goin on he felt. . He remembered the yesterday scene again.Had Shikha gone to Vidya..?? What did she want to do now? Gunny cudnt think of anything else.. He literally started running towards the infirmary.He opened the infirmary door to see tht........................

 

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Edited by sweetdreams4040 - 12 October 2008 at 10:28pm

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when he opened the door he saw vidya...she was much better now....infact she was getting discahrge from infirmary....there were floweres in her hand....she realised his presence

vidya : are sir..ap yaha? ap thode pareshan lag rahe hai...is everything ok?
 
gunny{to himself} : thank god...vidya thik hai...bt i guess i shouldnt tell her abt shikha right now...
 
vidya : are ap kya soch rahe hai?? meri presence me bhi kisi aur ka khayal?? kahi shikha to nahi??
 
gunny was shocked to hear dat..
vidya : are..mai to bas majak kar rahi thi...shikha  ne mujhe ye flowers bheje hai...aur get wel soon ka card bhi hai...
 
gunny was very surprised...at one moment shikha wanted to kill vidya and now she had sent her flowers and card.....i must talk to shikha...he thaught..akhir shikha karna kya chahti hai??
 
vidya : are ap phir soch me pad gae....aap thik to hai na sir?
 
gunny : ab tak to nahi tha...tumhe dekhne ke bad i am perfectly fine..
 
 
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hey sam gr8 uds....by the way where are tina and vijaya?

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Posted: 18 October 2008 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
first time i  am going to ud a FF so pllls forgive me if something is wrong
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gunny went through the corridor just thinking abt vidya saying dat shikha had sent her flowers.at dat time suddenly he heard a gun shot.he was just running so fast to see who was it  .at last   it was abhimanyu practicing .
gunny(to himself):thank god.. mein jo sochta  wo nahin hai
abhi:capt. , aap tek hai mein aapko subhe se dek raha hun......
gunny:nothing ,capt. u carry on
gunny leaves with a tensed face.then he started to walk agin to shikha's room.he had hope dat he can she her.at last shikha was der.she welcomed him.seeing gunny's face she understood wat was going in him becos she loved him very much dat uska feeling woh samj paa rehe thi.
gunny:tum janthi ho mein kislye yahan aaya hun
shikha:hain
gunny:toh mujhe batao, tumne he vidya ko kadam kar ne ke bare mein soch rahithi aur ab tum uske liye flowers be bej rehi ho
shikha:mein iske liye sirf ek javab de sakthi hun woh hai ,mein tumse pyaar karthi hun aur karti rahungi.
gunny became angry and when he turns he sees vidya and vidya had heard everyhting wat shikha had said.
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hope u all liked it
 


Edited by halley - 20 October 2008 at 6:23am

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 ofcourse  i liked it. very good
  nice try, keep it up.

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