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Tere Liye Hamesha -GV ff (Page 2)

shorts Senior Member

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Posted: 08 August 2008 at 8:16am | IP Logged
 wow !!!!!!
     sameera it was fantastic.

sanyogita_a Senior Member

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Posted: 08 August 2008 at 10:25am | IP Logged
sameera...ur update is awesome!!
el i am trying to update...but i am writing for the 1st sorry if there r any mistakes

back in vidya's room
vidya was very tensed...she was afraid. she didnt want to lose captain randhawa.  she already had lost Vansh...she was in gr8 dilemma. she was deep in her thougts. and then she notinced a letter..dat was for her..she opened it and after reading it she was shocked..the matter of thet letter was "agar apne captain ki jan bachana chahti ho to wahi karo jo hum chahate hai...warna captain randhawa ko kho dogi vansh ki tarah.."

she was shocked, she was angry and at the same time very concern about gunny..she left her room to check whether captain randhawa was ok or not...she was searching him like crazy and then....

Edited by sanyogita_a - 08 August 2008 at 10:28am

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-bhootni- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 August 2008 at 6:55pm | IP Logged
As soon as she got to Captain Randhawa's room, she noticed the door slightly opened with Akriti's side in full view. She peeked in to see the captain and sighed in relief as soon as she saw the captain talking to Akriti. Though Vidya decided that it was wrong to listent to their conversation, so she decided to walk back to her room.
Akriti, on the other hand, was telling Captain Randhawa about Vidya's strange behaviour.

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-Tina- Senior Member

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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 12:04am | IP Logged
Ok.....I like this kinda I am posting the other part!!....hope some of de people rmmbr me!!!!!.......
Akriti-Main janti hoon ki vidya har shoot ke scenes ke barrein mein aapko batati hain....aap vidya se baat kyun nahi kartein??...kuch toh zaroora hain....koi baat toh hain jo vidya ko khati ja rahi hain...aur woh kisi se nahi keh rahi...kya aapko pata hain??
Guny--Nahi cadet....lekin thankyou yeh sab bata ne ke liye...main Cadet Saxena se baat karney ki koshis karonga!!
ANd akritit leaves kinda satisfied!!...
As soon as Akriti left...and there was a tensed look on Guny's face....he really dint knoe what to do.....It was all getting too messy!!..
He slowly started walking towards her room..
He knocked ,.
She opened the door...not expecting him at all...
Vidya-Sir aap!!..
Guny-Ahh...cadet....main aape kuch baat karna chahtha tha......aap 2 minute mujhse baat kar sakti hain??
Vidya-Jee sir...
And he went inside the room......sat on the chair beside her bed..But he dint knoe from where to start!!...He really dint knoe what to ask to ask her...if she wanted to tell him she would have told him before itself...why dint she tell him??

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SamLuvsSaRun IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 7:47am | IP Logged

Gunny didn't know how to begin... Since Vidya always told him abt every small thing he always thought that Vidya trusted him but was he wrong?????... Just by looking at her he knew she wasn't fine... But what was the reason....???It was the first time that he had seen Vidya like this.... It was very important for Gunny to know abt the matter... He couldn't see his Vidya like this....Every time she was in pain he used to get this feeling that he was going thru right now........He felt very helpless.....

Vidya- Sir aap kuch kehne wale the...

Gunny- Cadet Saxena kya hua hai?? Sab theekh to hain naa??.... Aap itni pareshan kyun lag rahi hain???

Vidya---Pareshan...... Nahi Sir.... Vidya to bilkul theekh hai...

Gunny-Are you sure cadet??? Phir mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki aap mujhse kuch chupa rahi hai... Agar aisi koi baat hai then please tell me... Shayad main aapki kuch madad kar paaoin... Kya aapko mujhpar bharosa nahi hain???

Vidya—Sir Vidya ne aapse kaha na woh bilkul theekh hai Aap khamakha itna pareshan ho rahe hain....Aapko mere liye itni takleef lene ki koi jaroorat nahin.......

Gunny noticed Vidya was not so firm in what she was saying.....

Now he was very sure that theres some problem but there was no way to know about it...It was the first time Vidya did not trust him and he felt really bad abt it...Vidya was closely watching Capt Randhawa, she knew he was hurt. It was the first time Vidya had spoken to him like that...She couldn't forgive herself for what she did...She hated herself for sayin all that to him.......

Gunny-Theekh hai cadet agar aap keh rahi hain to....I hope I can trust you Isnt it??? OK ... Ab aap so jaaiye... Main chalta hoon Good night...

Vidya-Good night Sir....

Gunny came out of her room but wasn't able to know how to know the truth....He was in a state of confusion.....

Inside her room just as Vidya closed the door and she turned around she heard a gunshot.....

Capt Randhawa had just left..... Vidya couldn't believe it.... She struck the door open and she saw.............................



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Kavi1982 Senior Member

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Posted: 10 August 2008 at 8:23am | IP Logged
Ok here;s my next part hope you guys like it.

Vidya opened the door and saw blood splattered all over the walls and Capt.Randhawa lying in a pool of blood.   With a start Vidya sat up on her bed and looked around to see Akriti sleeping peacefully on her bed. She realized it was a nightmare she saw. She took a deep breath to calm herself. She lay on her bed once again . The nightmare totally upset her. Vansh was killed right in front of her but at that point of time she couldnot do anything to save him ...but this time she made a promise to herself that she would go to any length to protect Capt.Randhawa's life even give up her life if needed. She wondered what to do. 


She remembered whole fiasco with the eagle file that took place during the delta point drill.  After that incident she realized that they were not honourable people and would not stick to their word. After getting the file last time the man had refused to give out any details regarding Vansh's death so this time too she did not expect them to give out any details but she had to go as per their instructions.


The million dollar question at the moment for her was 'what to do?' She needed someone's help for sure.



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SamLuvsSaRun IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 7:24am | IP Logged

Hey now that?s really gr8.I must say this is fun... And not to forgetprincessuma, darwin, cool~~gal, sanyogita_a you guys you are doing a wonderful job takin the story forward.... Keep it up!!!!Smile


Now here?s my part of the story------------

I hope you guys like it...Wink




Vidya thought maybe confiding in someone wud be appropriate at this stage... But who to trust was the big question in front of her... She never came to the point of sharing anything with her fellow cadets because Capt Randhawa was always there for her. But today she couldn?t tell him abt anything... Vidya remembered the nightmare she had last night... No she couldn?t bear it again... She had seen the torture Vansh went through and she couldn?t see the same thing happening with Capt Randhawa. She had to do something to save him....But what???????


Back in his office Capt Randhawa was still where he was last night. He couldn?t understand as to do what so that he could know the truth...He was very sure Vidya wouldn?t tell him... But what was it that she didn?t want to tell him....????? Just as he was in his thoughts there was a knock on the door....

Gunny-Yes who is it????

Capt it?s me came the reply frm Capt Chauhan

Gunny-Oh Capt aap Aaiye.... Baithiye.......

Abhi?Hum aapko surveillance room main dekhne gaye the par pata chala aap to yahan hain... Capt Randhawa kya aapne khabar suni........

Gunny-Kaunsi khabar captain kahin aap SD ke baare mein to...????Kya aapko koi clue mile hain......????

Abhi?At ease Captain Randhawa.Lagta hai humse jyaada aap unke baare mein jyaada sochte hain... Par baat unke baare mein nahin. Baat darasal yeh hai ki Lala Gehlot jail se faraar ho chuka hain... He is missing frm last week...Actually yeh baat abhi tak bahar nahi aayi kyunki agar aam janta ko iske baare mein pata chalega toh unka army aur police par se vishwas hi ud jaayega... Aur aap to jaante hi hain Capt ki agar media ko iske baare mein jara bhi bhanak hui to phir..Kal raat ko wirless par message aaya hain HQ se... It?s a top secret Capt... Hume laga shayad Major Sharma ne aapko bata diya hoga......Aapko pareshan sa dekha to hume laga ki aap yahi baat ko lekar pareshan hain......... Hume toh yakeen nahi ho raha ki Lala Gehlot jail se bhaagne mein kaamyab ho gaya... Jab bhi us ghatiya Insaan ka jikr hota hai hume Babasa ki yaad aati hain....Kaise hamare Babasa ke saath us Lala Gehlot ne..........

Gunny?Im sorry Capt par yeh sab hua kaise... I mean eetne security ke baavajud... Lala bhaagne mein kaamyaab kaise, Mujhe kuch pata nahin chal raha....

Abhi?Pata to hume bhi nahi chal raha Capt. Randhawa, aap jaante hain iska matlab kya hain.....KMA is in danger... Kab kya ho jaaye pata nahin....Hume to lag raha hai shayad Minister Shroff ke maut ke peeche bhi Lala ka hi haath hoga..... We have to be very alert. Humpar bahut badi jimmedari hain....

Gunny-Yes Capt we need to be very alert..........

In the meantime an orderly came to tell that Maj. Sharma had been looking out for Capt. Chauhan...

Abhi left but Gunny was not able to know what was happening... Ek musibat khatam nahi ki dusri shuru... He wanted to know first the reason behind Vidyas condition but now there was something more in store for him....


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Anyone continue now...Smile

Edited by sweetdreams4040 - 11 August 2008 at 7:25am

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sanyogita_a Senior Member

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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 8:29am | IP Logged
once again niceupdate sameer!!!!
heres next part...

next evening...gunny  was just passing through corridor..he heard some1 talkin on d phone..1st he ignored but then he realized dat it was vidya's seemed dat she was arguing wid sum1...
vidya: vidya tumhare dhamkiyose ab nahi daregi..
and as she said dat the other person on the phone disconnected the she put dat phone down she started crying...
after hearing all this and seeing her crying gunny became very upset..
he asked her......
gunny : cadet...sab thik to hai...ap abhi phone pe kis se bat kar rahi thi..kis dhamki ke bareme ap bat kar rahi thi??
vidya : vidya thik hai sir...good night.
gunny became very angry at her...he stopped her an grabbed her arm and....

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