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Posted: 15 years ago






Hello and welcome to the Fanfiction
"Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na"
Obviously this name is taken from aamir's latest blockbuster production which has inspired me to start this story with the Bidaai characters.
The story is going to be similar to the movie but not the same.U ll find few traces that r similar to the movie, but still overall it will be something new.
Check below the character sketch of the fanfiction.

Characters:



Sadhna - A sweet and simple girl. She is Ragini's real younger sister who has done with her studies. Her marriage is fixed with one and only Aalekh.



Ragini - Ditto as her younger sister she is sweet and simple too. She is wise and intelligent and therefore wants to pursue a master's degree and so she is still doing her studies. She studies in the same college as Ranvir.
Ragini and Ranvir are the best of pals. "Rags" is the name given to Ragini by her best friend.



Aalekh - Eldest son in the Rajvansh family. He is engaged with Sadhna. He helps his father in his business.



Ranvir - He is Aalekh's younger brother and loves him a lot and respects him. But he is not at all serious with his future. His father being a very big man does nt want Ranvir to spoil his future and therefore he is there studying Masters with Ragini.
Luckily, Ranvir has Ragini who tries her very best to make Ranvir succeed.
Famously known as "Ranny" - a name he gave himself n likes only near ones to take it.

Few things to know before the first part.

RagVir




Ragini was a simple and soft spoken girl as always, but there was a time when Ranvir never liked Ragini for no reasons.
He used to tease her saying "Rags".
Today the same thing continues but the reasons are different and no one else can ever dare to call Ragini like that.
 He was(and is) known as an "awara" kind of guy in the university.
A day when Ranvir caught up with fight with a classmate and was badly beaten, Ragini did everything she cud for him.
This was the day when Ranvir realized how good Ragini was and they both became best of friends.
Even today, Ragini stops Ranvir from bad things which he continues and only for her Ranvir can do it but the qualities still remain in his blood.

SaaLekh



Ambika was a link b/w Sadhna n Aalekh's family.Over here she is nt A-R's choti maa.
Aalekh's parents always wanted a talented and simple bahu.
She shud be able to understand the importance of relations and family values were their words.
Ambika cud only think of Ragini. Ragini was still studying so the other option was Sadhana.
 She had good aquaintances with her mother. They both were once college friends.
RagVir were dumb founded when they came to knw that their own brothers and sisters are going to get married.
Saalekh's relationship was a plus point in RagVir's relationship as well.
This made their friendship even more good.
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This is all abt the introduction.
The Fanfiction will start from the day of Saalekhs Mehndi and later marriage and take a turn to the relationship b/w Ragvir.
Simultaneously, Saalekh story will go.

Hope the introduction was quiet good.
Please do leave ur comments and suggestions for me to knw if u r interested in the FF.
Otherwise i can stop it.

Thanks
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Update Index:~

Introduction - pg1
Part1 - pg2
Precap - pg3
Part2 - pg4
Precap - pg5
Part3 - pg5
Precap - pg8
Part4 - pg9
Precap - pg12
Part5 - pg13
Precap - pg16
Part6 - pg18
Precap - pg20
Part7 - pg23
Precap - pg24
Part8 - pg25
Precap - pg26
Part9 - pg27
Precap - pg29
Part10 - pg31
Precap - pg31
Part11 - pg32
Precap - pg33
Part12 - pg34
Precap - pg35
Part13 - pg37





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Posted: 15 years ago
lol thanks ... but i havent done any job yet 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oh but I like the title so far.
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks a lot!
i have updated the intro - dnt forget to check
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This content was originally posted by: pinkykhan

Excellent Intro. 👏




thanks pinky.
a reqst pls check the banner contest thread. :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
sounds good... pls continue cnt wait👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwww😳😳 awwwwwwwwwww😳😳 awwwwwwww 😳😳
very gud!fan fic's mai v can make stories jo hum chahte hain..👏
awww priya r alekhG. works wiv his dad he goes to office..awww..
in the serial he really wants to go to office..😳
i culdnt c him crying dat day 4 office n 4 a chair n wateva happened
in the office..i wanted him to b normal dat day dat sec n den stay
n work in office aww...👏
talkativetaurus wats ur name???u made my day yarr..my alekhG.
in office awww shoo cuteeeeeee!!😳
woww m waiting 4 the rest of the story
post ASAP!
Edited by dina - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
This content was originally posted by: harry_fan2

sounds good... pls continue cnt wait👍🏼



thanks will continue it. hope to see more members reading it.😊
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This content was originally posted by: dina

awwwwwww😳😳 awwwwwwwwwww😳😳 awwwwwwww 😳😳

very gud!fan fic's mai v can make stories jo hum chahte hain..👏
awww priya r alekhG. works wiv his dad he goes to office..awww..
in the serial he really wants to go to office..😳 - yeh i felt the same ... like crying
i culdnt c him crying dat day 4 office n 4 a chair n wateva happened
in the office..i wanted him to b normal dat day dat sec n den stay
n work in office aww...👏
talkativetaurus wats ur name???u made my day yarr..my alekhG. i m Affy :)
in office awww shoo cuteeeeeee!!😳
woww m waiting 4 the rest of the story
post ASAP! - yeh will do it , dnt worry :) + thanks for the wonderful comments.

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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 1

Rajvansh's house (Ranveer's room):

Its morning 10:00 am and Ranveer is sleeping like a lazy boy. After a few minutes Aalekh comes in the room totally dressed in suit like a gentleman ready to go to the office.

Aalekh- Ranveer utho ab kitni der tak so ge? (he shakes ranveer)

Ranveer-umm ..AB sone do na... aaj to chutti hai ..

Aalekh- arey uth badmaash ... aaj ke din bhi soyega .. ghar me sab ko kaam me madad kar ..

Ranveer- (rubbing his eyes) kyu aaj kya hai? (gets up with a speed) oh shit! aaj to mehendi ceremony hai. oye hoye balle balle .. mere bhaiyya ki shaadi hone wali hai ...

Aalekh- (blushing a little) chupkar .. chal ab jaldi se chal bahar

He leaves for office. Ranveer gets fresh n comes in the main room. After an hour phone rings n Vasundara picks it up.

Vasundara: Hello.

Ragini : Namaste aunty, main Ragini bol rahi hu. Ranveer hai

Vasundara: lks at Ranveer .. jee bete .. badmaash sofa par soya hua cricket dekh raha hai ..ab tumhi use samjhao ... tumhari hi baat maanta hai...

Rangini:  jee aunty..😊

Vasundhara: Ranveer tumhara phone ...

Ranveer: kaun hai mom ... kehdo main bohat busy hu ..

Vasundhara: (to ragini) suna tumne ragini (Ragini smiles)

Ranveer : (listens it) oh shit .. Rags.. abhi aaya mom .. Rags to mujhe maar dalegi .. usne mujhe phone karne kaha tha..

Vasundara: ye kya Rags lagaa rakha hai .. itna accha naam kharab kar diya bacchi ka ..

Ranveer: Come on mom .. its kool .. aap nahi samjhogi ...(takes the receiver) Hey Rags ... kaisi ho .. i m sorry yaar ..

Ragini: koi baat nahi Ranveer ... ab meri baat suno ..

Ranveer: kaun ranveer? tumhara koi naya dost hai kya?

Ragini : uff .. mujhse ye Ranny Vanny nahi hota .. ok thik hai "Ranny"

Ranveer: ye hui na baat .. ab bolo kya hai ..

Ragini : suno .. Sadhana ne mujhse kuch cheezein kharid ne ke liye kaha hai .. pls mere saath mall me chalo na ..

Ranveer: ok thik hai mujhe bhi waise AB ke liye kuch surprise gift lena hai .. main tumhe 1 ghante me lene aata hu ...Take Care.

Ragini: ok bye .

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Ok this was the first part. I knw its short. But i think i m going to give short updates so that i can post it regularly or atleast 3-4 times a week, otherwise i wont be able to give updates at all.
But pls leave ur comments if u r really reading it so that i may knw if u all want to have this FF or no.
Thanx.

Edited by talkativetaurus - 15 years ago