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FF: Bringin' SexyBack *Sari troubles* - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago

Haila!!! you are just plain brillant! The loved the beginning scene, the smiles, and then rubbing the back! (I wish I could do that too him)! And wow, Ranbir inner thoughts are killing him, bechari is in a mixed state!!! I love it, the story line is turning out really well!!not well yaar its just superb! And uff, this Kanya has got spice!!! Nice

Oye, yaar!!! You are magificent! And I have, well we have told you before that its those people loss that are not commented!!! Forget them!!! We love it, so yaar continue like right now!!! Right now!!!😳
 
 
Please continue soon! 😭 I need more of this wonder!
Edited by Multani90 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
its a really good ff and i'm dying to read the next update!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Recap:

 

K: Shut up! Main kuch nahi sunna chahti! Ab agar main tumse kuch sunoongi, toh woh tab hoga jab tum mujhe apnaaoge. Main tumhe I love you bulvakar hi rahegi! Yeh vaada hai, Mrs. Ranbir Nanda ki!

 

With that, she kissed him hard and pulled the bed sheet around her and walked away, leaving Ranbir confused and sorry.

 

Part 15: Sari troubles

 

~Nanda Living Room~

 

The family is in the living room.

 

R: (checks watch) Yeh Kanya aur Shanaya kahaan hai? Unhe pata hai aaj press conference hai!

 

BigD: Oye khote! Chup! Woh ladkiyaan hai. Tayyar hone mein thodi time chahiye!

 

A: Big D, ladkiyaan aisi kya karti hai? Hamesha kahin jaane se pehle unhe 'tayyar' hona hai!

 
His question was answered as Kanya and Shanaya walked down the stairs. As everyone's face turned towards the stairs, their mouths dropped open.

 
 
 
 
S: (thinking) Main itni khoobsurat lag rahi hoon! Sab log mujhe aise ghur rahe hai!
 
But it wasn't her who they were staring at. It was Kanya. She was ravishing.

 

 

 

M: (shoves Ranbir) Jaao beta. Tumhari dulhan teri intezaar kar rahi hai!

 

Ranbir gulps and walks towards Kanya, who is standing, smiling serenely at the bottom of the stairs.

 

R: K-kanya ? tum ? main ? I mean ? woh ? tum bahut...

 

A: You're looking hot!

 

Ranbir swerved around and glared at Ayaan, who had seemed to have temporary self control. Ayaan looked down hurriedly and embarrassedly. Shanaya looked as if she was about to burst out crying. Ranbir hastily took Kanya's hand and pulled her with him.

 

As the family walked out, Ira and Eva caught hold of Kanya.

 

I: Kanya chachi, tum bahut hot lag rahi ho!

E: Yeah! Bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho! Tumne yeh sari kahaan se kharidi?...

 

Ranbir's mind started to wander and he found that his eyes had drifted down to Kanya's waist, catching glimpses of her skin under the sheer sari. He stared.

 

R: (thinking) No! Kya kar rahe ho Ranbir? Tum toh uski jaal mein phaste ja rahe ho! Kuch karna padega.

 

He hurried up to her and roughly pulled her away from Ira and Eva. He hung back and waited for everyone else to pass them. Then, he bent down and whispered in Kanya's ear.

 

R: Look, tum jo kar rahi ho, mujhe sab pata hai aur main tumhare jaal mein bilkul nahi phasunga!

 

Kanya looked up at him innocently.

 

K: Kya matlab, Ranbir?

 

R: Itni innocent mat bano! Tum aur main dono jaante hai ki tum kya kar rahi ho!

 

Kanya tilted her head and smiled. Ranbir looked at her apprehensively. He pulled his top two buttons together.

 

R: A-aise kyun dekh rahi ho? Kya hai?

K: I love you

R: Whatever.

K: Jab tum gussa karte ho, tum bahut cute lagte ho

 

Ranbir was silent. He was confused and didn't know how to answer her.

 

 

 

~In the car~

 

Ranbir was still confused. Kanya was so unpredictable! One minute, she would be screaming at him with rage, and the next, she would be perfectly sweet.

 

R: Issi liye maine ladkiyon se door raha! God, they're confusing!

 

Kanya (who was asleep) leaned on Ranbir and her head rested on his shoulder. Ranbir looked down in surprise and saw her. He grinned in satisfaction.

Edited by kwarudkar - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
brillliant part
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

great updat

need 2 be longer
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Birilliant though needs to be longer
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hmmmm. nice.ranbir kab kahogey woh teen shabd.Why so short.Write more soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
krish!
aahr loved the part ..
itni behchain tha next part parne ke liye aur tum hohke chota sa part dehthe hon!
please make longer i want more of ur brilliance
and loved the saaari!
i loved this part!
continue soooooooooooooooooooooooooon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
continue soon! this is getting interesting!
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Posted: 15 years ago
continue soon and make the update longer plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz