safeplacetoland
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Part 6
Pia- Mom! Ranbir Uncle! Yahaan aawo! Dekho yahaan kisi ne bahut saara roses yahaan rakha hain. Arre! Jaldi aawo koi!
Kanya- Haan-haan! Aa rahi hoon. Aa rahi hoon. Ranbir yahaan aawo!
Ranbir and Kanya come upto the door where Pia is holding some white and red roses in her hand.
Kanya- Yeh roses? Ranbir tumne rakha kya?
Ranbir- Pagal!! Agar dena tha toh directly deta naa? Chup chupke dene ki kya zaroorat hain?
Kanya- You are right but……
Pia- Uncle? Aap ne hi diya naa? Ab maan bhi lo! Pyaar huwa chup ke se…….yeh kya huwa chup ke se!!!!
Ranbir- Pia!! Maine bola na agar dena hi tha toh khulam-khulam deta chup chupke dene ko koi zaroorat hain. And aakhri baar I don't love your mother…….
Kanya- Right. Pia mujhe aise mazak pasand nahin. Tune rakha kya?
Pia- Nopes! MOM! Main bhala de doongi kyun?
Ranbir- Big deal. Phir mujhe kyun accuse kar rahe ho?
Pia- Kyunki aap Mama se pyaar karti ho!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U LOVE MAMA!!
Ranbir- Oh just shut up!
Kanya- Just get this straight!!! I can never love Ranbir! Got that? Now mind it.
Ranbir- Aisa kyun?
Kanya- Shut up! Patah nahin lekin mujhe aisa lagta hain ki kisi ne rule banaya hain ki main Ranbir se kabhi bhi pyaar nahin kar sakti. And Pia please just stop bugging me on this matter!
Pia- Sorry mom. I really am. Sorry uncle.
Ranbir- Its okay Pia!
Kanya- Ttheeke! Magar aisa phir se mat karna.
Pia- Okay my darling mumsie. Magar yeh flowers kisne di?
Kanya- I don't know!
Ayaan- Maine di!!!!!
Kanya- Ayaan? Tum yahaan?
Ayaan- Kanya I am too much madly in love with you.
Kanya- Ayaan maine kahaan na tumse? Please. Yahaan se jaawo.
Ayaan- Kanya I love you. Main tumhare bina jee nahin sakti. Maine apni zindagi main ek bahut badi galti ki thi. Ab maaf karo.
Kanya- Galti? Tumne kya galti ki? Anyways ye chapter closed hain Ayaan.
Ayaan- Nahin Kanya koi galti nahin. I love you too much to let go off you.
Kanya- Ayaan I too love you.
Ayaan- Phir?
Kanya- Lekin mere liye meri beti zyaada mayne rakhti hain.
Ayaan- I promise you I will keep her very happy.
Kanya- Ayaan Pia doesn't want me to marry you.
Ayaan- Kaise beti ho? Apne maa ke khushi ke liye itna kuch bhi?
Kanya- Ayaan please meri beti ko math koso. I love her a lot.
Ayaan- I too love her a lot.
Kanya- Huh?
Ayaan- I mean she is your daughter. So I too love her like my daughter.
Kanya- Ayaan please leave me.
Ayaan- No Kanya.
Kanya- Why are you so hellbent on marrying me?
Ayaan- Coz I fell in love with you at first sight itself. And love at first sight is love till last sight.
Kanya- I don't think so.
Ayaan- Kanya…..
Kanya- JUST GO FROM HERE!
Ayaan- Kanya……
Kanya- I DON'T WANT TO TALK TO YOU. NOW JUST GO!
Ayaan- Kanya please re-consider…….
Kanya- Ayaan please go!
Ayaan- Okay. But I wont stop loving you…..
Kanya- I don't care alright? Now go!
Ayaan goes from there. Kanya by now has broken into tears. Ranbir and Pia console her.
Scene fades which indicates that the part has come to an end.
END OF PART 6
Sorry guys for such a small part. It was only 2 pages on WORD. I am thinking of writing a SS now that's why and I didn't get anything else. Now this present track is of Ayaan stalking Kanya.
I want comments.
Nidheya
spate22
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Why did you bring him back?!!! I almost thought those flowers were from Ranbir!!!
Anyway, thanks for the update!!! So Ayaan is going to stalk Kanya now?!!! Can I hope that Ranbir will beat him up if he ever goes near Kanya again?!!!!
Pia is sooo cute when it comes to RanKan, I hope she gets her wish!!!
Please continue soon!!!
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