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matwamango

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Its good yaar.Can't wait for the next part

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miss.sonia

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Posted: 22 September 2008 at 8:30am | IP Logged

oh... thank god

continue soon

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Posted: 22 September 2008 at 11:01am | IP Logged
brill update
pls continue soon

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great update
continue soon
 

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Posted: 22 September 2008 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
thankyou so much for the comments! im sorry to scare u guys but just wanna have fun!!! anyway 1 secret! ayaan's exactly out there are two major twists in the story! i think after that the story will end coz punarjanm is going on a good track! well it will take atleast 10 updates i promise before ending it! after those 2 twists if i get anymore twists i will defily add them....those twists will be a threat to ran-kan relationship!

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Noooooooooo, threats to Rankan in this story?!!!!!CryOuch Whyyyyy?!!!  So you're gonna end this story soon?!!!Confused
 
 
 
 
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not soon it will take abt a 2 months! i told na like 10 updates minimum! the threat will be like sumthing crazy ivolving si=ome dark stuff! there are two major twists as i told you.....i have given glipses of both! in kind of u noe hints! but i cant reveal much now......next update wont have much of the twist! will be sumthing funny nd sweet!
Nidheya

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Part 5

It is 2 oclock in the night. Ranbir wants to drink some water. He goes into the kitchen for that. There he bumps into Kanya. Kanya loses her balance and amlost falls. Ranbir catches her and they have an eyelock.

Ranbir- Kya huwa?

Kanya- Kuch nahin. Aise kyun dekh rahe ho?

Ranbir- Kuch nahin.

Kanya- Ranbir kya tumne kabhie kisi se pyaar kiya hain?

Ranbir- Nahin toh! Aise kyun poocha?

Kanya- Bas poocha. Aise koi vajah nahin hain!

Ranbir-Tum mujhse pyaar karte ho kya?

Kanya- WHATTTTT????

Ranbir- Phir tum mere baahon mein aise kyun reh rahe ho?

A shocked Kanya straightens herself.

Kanya- Pagal kahika! Goodnight jaa rahi hoon. Bye!

Ranbir- Goodnight sugar!

Kanya goes from there. She sttles down in her bed and recalls the moment. It was so warm and comfy in his arms, so cozy and cute. She felt like she had been there before in a more intimate way but she knew that that had neve happened.

Ranbir- Kanya bhi naa ek dum pagal hain.

Ranbir knew that she had been there and also that they had seen every inch of each other. He goes back to sleep.

NEXT DAY

In Pia's and Kanya's room.

Kanya- Wake up sleepyhead! PIA!! Get up!!!

Pia( slowly openeing her eyes)- Mama……

Kanya- Get up!

Pia- Sone do na…

Kanya- Kitna sowoge tum? Ab utt hi lo nahin toh…

Pia- Nahin toh kya mama?

Ranbir- Nahin toh Kanya Ayaan se shaadi karlega.

Pia- Naaaaahhhhiiiinnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pia gets up with a start.

Kanya- Thank you Ranbir.

Ranbir- My pleasure (bowing).

Kanya- Silly guy (pulling his cheeks).

Pia- Mama aaj kya plan hain?

Kanya- Kuch nahin.

Ranbir- Kuch nahin matlab? Aaj hum teen Lonawla jaayenge for the weekend. Okay?

Kanya- Its expensive Ranbir.

Ranbir- Kanya fikar kyun karti ho? Maine resort main reservations bhi kar liya hain.

Pia- Wow Uncle you are the best! Kaash aap mere daddy hote! Then it would be so perfect!

Kanya- Sochna bhi mat. Main kabhi bhi ranbir jaise langoor se shaadi nahin karne waali!

Ranbir- Main langoor hoon?

Kanya- Haan! Koi doubt hain kya? Hain sreiously pagal ho yaar!

Ranbir- Kanya tum ek bandariya ho!

Kanya- Wow female monkey!

Pia- Main kya hoon?

Ranbir- Chota baccha!

Kanya- No my daughter!

Ranbir- Main langoor hoon??

Kanya- Kitne baar bolu main haan haan haan!

Ranbir stars chasing her. The song "Lo Dard Jaaye Lo Neend Aaye" starts playing. I didn't get the song link. But if see the movie and hear the song just remember our Ran-Kan scene!!! After lik 15 minutes he catches up with her and hugs her from behind. Pia quickly captures this on her camera and saves it.

Kanya- Sorry. I will never call you langoor again.

Ranbir- Good girl. Aisa hain toh I will never call you bandariya again!

Pia- Kya guys!

Kanya- Kya?

Pia- You guys make such a cute couple, yet you two don't love each other!!

Ranbir- Pia please…

Pia- Okay okay I am going inside. Khush?

Kanya- Haan!

Pia goes inside.

TWO DAYS LATER IN PARK RESORT IN Lonawla

Pia is swimming in the pool while Kanya and Ranbir are chatting away and recalling old days.

Kanya- Patah nahin Ranbir jab bhi main apni solah saal ke pehle ke din yaad kar rahi hoon toh, tab mujhe kuch yaad nahin hain. I get all blanked out. Patah nahin kyun.

Ranbir- Kanya chillax! Koi problem nahin yaar!

Kanya- Nahin Ranbir aisa kyun hota hain baar baar? Mujeh kuch samajh main nahin aati!

Ranbir- Kanya sugar you are not going to think about such stuff.

Kanya- Mujhe lag raha hai ki I am suffering from ALZCHEIMERS disease.

Ranbir- Are you crazy? You are only 31.

Kanya- Patah hain. Lekin itni badi memory loss! I don't think it is normal.

Ranbir- Kanya I want you to totally forget the past and try living a fresh new life with Pia. She surely will appreciate it!

Kanya- I guess so.

Ranbir- Tumhe itni tension main dekhna use bhi achha nahin lagta hoga na Kanya? Think about her. She is your daughter.

Kanya- I know but now that I have lost that job I don't know what to do.

Ranbir- I am here naa? I will help you out Kanya. We will find out a way. Once we get back I will pay for Pia's fees for the last 3 months okay? Then will you be fine?

Kanya- Itni badi ehsaan? Main kya karoon?

Ranbir- Yeh ehsaan nahin hain.

Kanya- Fir kya?

Ranbir- Dosti hain!

Kanya- Sweet!!!

Ranbir- Phir swim?

Kanya- Sure thing!

Ranbir- Race you to the pool.

Kanya and Ranbir run upto the pool and jump into the water. They start splasing water on each other and play around. It is a really funny and cute sight.

AN HOUR LATER

Kanya and Ranbir dry themselves and so does Pia. Then they dress up and go the restaurant. Kanya is wearing the saree below in the link-

http://hotandnerdy.files.wordpress.com/2007/09/hn-instyle-saris-ash.jpg

It is the same thing but is a little tighter! And her hairstyle is also the same as in the pic.

Ranbir- Toh kya order kare?

Pia- Chicke biryani!

Kanya- Dum aaloo!

Ranbir- Methi paneer!

Kanya- Huh? Tum mere favourtie order kar rahe ho?

Ranbir- Tum mere order kiya isliye!

Kanya- Arre baap re! Maine tumhare liye order kiya.

Ranbir- Lets have both!

Kanya- Good idea!

So they order the dishes. Once it comes they eat up their food and it is in the night. Kanya has put Pia to sleep and she goes upto Ranbir to tell him good night.

Kanya- Ranbir good night. Thanks a lot for everything!'

Ranbir- Tumhe wo rule maloom nahin hain kya?

Kanya- Kaunsa?

Ranbir- Ki dosti main sorry aur thank you nahin hain!

Kanya- Tum bhi naa! Okay main sorry nahin boloongi!

Ranbir- Good girl! Good Night kiddo! Raat bahut ho gayi hain. Go to sleep.

Kanya- Good Night Ran!

Ranbir- Good Night Kan!

Kanya suddenly hugs him and that too tightly.

In Ranbir's head the following sentence keeps replaying "Kanya kabhi bhi Ranbir se pyaar nahin kar paayegi". He lets go of her then.

Ranbir- Good Night. Ab go to sleep!

Kanya- Chillax! I am going! Bye!

Ranbir- Bye!

So they go into their respective rooms. Kanya goes and gives a kiss to Pia and she goes to sleep. Ranbir also goes to sleep.

The scene fades which indicates that the part is over. Hope you guys liked it. Please do comment and give me ideas and thoughts about why Kanya doesn't remember what happened before she turned 16. I wont update unless I get atleast 5 suggestions okay?

NIDHEYA

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