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FF:Jaane Tu, Ya Jaane Na Pg12 Pt9 Updated (Page 3)

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Posted: 16 September 2008 at 6:46am | IP Logged
great update
wow that all happend a little too fast lol
continue soon!
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Posted: 16 September 2008 at 8:45am | IP Logged

are yaar what a twist

i dont understan does ranbir love kanu or not

he didnt look angry or jalouse and that stupid ayanAngry 

any ways thanks for pm

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Posted: 16 September 2008 at 4:39pm | IP Logged
that was a brill update...
good twist...
pls continue soon
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Part 4

It is Monday and Kanya is all ready to go for work. She is wearing a satin blue blouse. It looks some what like this one. Just click the link- http://content.next.co.uk/images/Press/PressPreview/w/RGB/016.jpg

And the followink is of the jeans she wore http://mediaext.drjays.com/media/202/257/files/2022573.jpg

She then wears her hair up in the following link-

http://www.myhaircuts.com/more/layered-hairstyles.jpg

So if you click the above links you will know how Kanya looked. She drinks a glass of orange juice and has a toast. Then she goes out of the house and takes a taxi and goes to her office. She looked so happy that she felt like she was living her life from a fresh beginning. Then she arrives at the office. Everyone starts congratulating her and she just keeps blushing. Then Ayaan comes and scoops her in his arms and carries her upto his cabinet.

Kanya- Ayaan put me down naa!

Ayaan- Not until you kiss me!

Kanya- Okay baba!

Then she gives him a kiss on his cheek.

Kanya- Ab khush?

Ayaan- Yes!

Kanya- So put me down naa!

Ayaan- Okay!

So he puts her down on his table.

Ayaan- So shaadi kab?

Kanya- Itni jaldi? Nahin nahin!

Ayaan- Awww! Kanya c'mon!

Kanya- Ayaan please nah!!

Ayaan- Kanya!

Kanya- Ayaan tumne meri zindagi main woh khushi laaye ho jo kisi ne bhi nahin laya! Haan Sunil bhi wahi khushi layi thi jab maine unse pyaar kiya tha. Lekin un hone mujhe dhoka diya aur mujhe aur Pia ko chodkar hamesha-hamesha ke liye chodkar chala gaya!

Ayaan- Oh. Tumne kaha ki yeh Sunil bilkul mera jaisa dikhta hain. You mean exactly?

Kanya- Haan Ayaan. Tum toh uske xerox copy ho!

Ayaan- Oh! Waise I hope I am not reminding you too much of him!

Kanya- Aisa nahin hain! You make me happy!

Ayaan- Thank god!

Kanya- Ayaan! Tumhare gharwale is rishte se khush hain kya?

Ayaan- I don't know! I seriously don't care! I just want you!

Kanya- So sweet!

Ayaan- What did your family members say about it?

Kanya- They just want me happy. So they obviously agreed!

Ayaan- Hmmmmm.

Kanya- Listen what do you say about Pia? I will marry you only if you accept her! She means to me more than anybody has!

Ayaan- More than me?

Kanya- Yes of course! Anyways will you accept her?

Ayaan- I will accept her as my child. After our wedding she will live as if she always had a father!

Kanya- You are so sweet! You are a perfect father!

Ayaan- Anyways what does she think about this relationship?

Kanya- Sure! She just wants me to be happy! As always!

A voice- NOOOOO! I don't want you to marry Mr. Nanda!

Kanya- Pia? What are you doing in here?

Pia- Giraffe Uncle brought me here!

Kanya- Why are you saying such stuff?

Pia- Because I don't want you to marry him! Just because he looks like papa doesn't mean you should marry him!

Kanya- Pia yeh kaise bakhwas kar rahe ho?

Pia- Bakhwas? Aap isse shaadi kyun kar rahe ho?

Kanya- I love him! It is obvious!

Pia- Mama you only know him for 3 days?

Kanya- Pia I feel like I have known him for my whole life!

Pia- Mama please you wont marry him!!!

Kanya- Pia please….

Pia- Mama he could be just using you!

Kanya- PRIYANKA RATHORE!

Then Kanya goes and slaps Pia right across her face twice!

Kanya- Never are you going to talk about Ayaan again like that!! Now get out of here!

Pia by now had broken into tears.

Pia- Mama aap aise kaise kar sakti ho?

Kanya- Main kuchh bhi kar sakti hoon Pia! I am your mother!

Pia- No you arent! My mother never scolded me! She never slapped me! You are not my mother. You are a lovesick…………………………….

Kanya- Pia just shut up!

Pia- I cant believe you slapped me for a person you met 3 days ago! You slapped a person you have known for 9 years for a person you met 3 days! I am going! And I am never going to talk to you!

Kanya- Pia please!

Pia- Bye!

Then she storms out of the room. Then Ranbir walks in looking upset and angry.

Kanya- Ranbir tum?

Ranbir- Haan main. Kanya tum aise kaise kar sakte ho?

Kanya- Matlab?

Ranbir- Kanya tum is aadmi ke liye Pia ko thapad maara? Tum aise kaise kar sakte ho?

Kanya- Ranbir tum bhi?

Ranbir- Kanya tum apni nau saal ki bati ko thapad maaroge is aadmi ke liye? I am disgusted with you!

Kanya- Ranbir please at least you understand!

Ranbir- Bye!

Ranbir also walks out of the room and then they go home. Kanya by now has broken into tears.

Ayaan- Kanya please don't cry.

Kanya- Ayaan I am very sorry but I cant continue this relationship with you.

Ayaan- Kanya what?

Kanya- Ayaan no. Perhaps they are right. Bye. And if you want you can fire me too. I think I deserve it.

Ayaan- Kanya please don't go.

Kanya- Ayaan bye….

Ayaan- Kanya I will always love you!

Kanya also runs out of the cabinet and takes a taxi and goes home.

AT HOME

Kanya arrives at home and is sad to see how Pia and Ranbir are quiet. She goes up and gives Pia a hug and a kiss.

Kanya- How's my little baby?

Pia- I am not your baby!

Kanya- Good news Pia! I have split up with Ayaan.

Ranbir- Really?

Kanya- Why are you so happy?

Ranbir- I am happy for Pia yaar!

Pia- Mama I love you!

Kanya- I thought that it was not right to slap Pia for Ayaan.

Ranbir- Good that you have finally come to your senses!

Kanya- Yes!

Kanya runs upto Ranbir and hugs him and kisses him on the cheek. Ranbir blushes. Yes he really blushes.

Ranbir- Yeh kis liye?

Kanya- Kyunki tumne mujhe apni right senses pe laya!

Ranbir- Anytime bud!

Kanya- I really love you Ranbir! You are the best!

Pia goes wild when she hears that.

Pia- WOW! That is so wonderful! I never thought that that would happen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya and Ranbir- What would happen?

Pia- Mama you told Ranbir uncle that you love him! Why don't you marry him?

Kanya- Are you crazy?????

Pia- No!

Kanya- I love him but only as a friend!

Pia- Oh!

Pia- Okay I have to go to do homework!

Kanya- Okay go!

Pia goes. Now it is only Ranbir and Kanya.

Ranbir- Pia sure is crazy!

Kanya- I know! You and me?

Ranbir- Well she was partially right!

Kanya- WHAT DO YOU MEAN?

Ranbir- Mazak kar rahi hoon.

Kanya- Thank god!

Ranbir- Imagine you and me??? Never ever!

Kanya- I know! All my life I knew! If I ever marry someone it will never be you!

Ranbir- Same feelings!

The scene fades. Kanya and Ranbir had the feeling that everything had just returned to normal.

END OF FF!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

JOKING GUYS!! IT IS THE END OF PART4!!

Nidheya

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Loved It!
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Posted: 21 September 2008 at 5:07pm | IP Logged
gr8......................
u almost scared me when u said end of ff
but please update soon
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Posted: 21 September 2008 at 5:15pm | IP Logged
thnxxx a lot! Anyways guys next update Roses For Someone Special starring Shahid Kapoor and Priyanka Chopra perhaps tomm or today!
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Posted: 21 September 2008 at 7:24pm | IP Logged
lol i was about to scream when i saw "end of FF"
thanx for the pm
it was a great update and im soo happy ayaan is out of the story(hopefully)
plzz start Ran-Kan love story soon
and continue soon!!

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