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I have an idea...why don't we all play a game to write this song?  The first person writes one line, then the second writes another that rhymes with the first.  Then the third person thinks of a new line that goes with the theme, and the fourth person rhymes with the third person's line.  As long as everyone sticks to the topic of friendship and makes sure it flows, I think it can work.  What do you say?

good idea suhanasafar... and i have some bad news..... adicoolnclassy has withdrawn from the contest so we're one member short.... so can someone start the song? then we'll all add to it

Edited by SuhanaSafar - 15 years ago

good beginning.... here's the next line... you can change it if it's not good....

we learn from disney about friendship and love

Originally posted by: chhilt

good beginning.... here's the next line... you can change it if it's not good....

we learn from disney about friendship and love

how to have fun and enjoy ourselves too

 

what do you think?

Thats realli good 👏
but do you think that we should add the too at the end?

Chhit, it sounds good...but I thought the second line was supposed to rhyme with the first....oh well, now the 1st and 2nd lines can just be one long line...and so can the 3rd and 4th....Then the longer lines can rhyme with each other.  I thought of a rhyme, so I added it.  From now on, please make sure to rhyme (line 2 with line 4, line 6 with line 8, line 10 with line 12, and so on...).  I hope you guys understand what I mean.

one question

that's great suhana! and redi, i expect fifteen-sixteen lines should be enough... and by the way, since we're supposed to make a song, shouldn't we have a chorus too? otherwise it'll be like a poem, don't you think? Edited by chhilt - 15 years ago

^ Yeah, you're right.  Something will have to be repeating....Hmm...I'm not sure what to do about that.  But I'm sure we can come up with something as we go.  Is it okay if we just try to continue this for now?  If someone thinks of something for the chorus, they can add it. 

sure! that would be great! we still have ten days....