Joined: 28 October 2005
Har insane ke do chehreh hote hain'ek jo voh duniya ko dehkana chatha hai'aur dusra jo voh hai'Voh chehra jo voh appne app se bhi nahi chupapatha'
Bani-One ticket to Mumbai please'
Main Bani hoon, Bani dixit'kuch log yeh manthe hain ki naam main koi dam nahi hai, liken I personally beg to differ'Naam main pechan hoti hai'Main job se silsle main Mumbai jarahehoon'
Okay fine'tum se kuch bhi nahi chupaoongi'Main pichle 6 months se kise se email se baath karahi hoon'
Liken main usske bare main kuch nahi janthi'Sirf ithna hi'ki voh Mumbai main rehtha hai'
Aur dusra uski email ID
Maine yeh baath kisi ko bhi nahi bathaiyeh'Ki shayad mujhe use pyarr hogaya hai'
Maine yeh baath Ma ko nahi bathayi'Unko yeh bathaya hai'ki main kisi job ke chakar main Mumbai jarahi hoon'
Kiran-BANI!!Jaldi kar'tujhe toh patha hai ki Bangalore main sham ke time kithni traffic hothi hai'Tere flight choot jaye gi'
Bani-Nahi chootegi'Voh flight mujhe mere zindagi ke pass legaygi'Bus main appna email check karloon'
NO NEW MESSAGES
Lagtha hai'budhu ne koi mail nahi beeja'
Bani quickly ran to her house mandir'
TO GOD-Ab appka kam hai mujhe mere fate se milane ka'okay..! Mujhe sach main nahi samajme araha ki mujhe voh kasie milega'Liken jase bhi milega..app ko milwana hoga'Okay!!Well wish me best of luck'
Rano-Di!!Kisse bathein kar rahi ho'oh'God se jagra??Before you leave!!Chaloo..jaldi'
Kiran-Acha Bani sun'Pia tujhe lena airport poonch jaye gi'okay'Appna cell phone on rakna'
Hey'How was it??hope okay'if not good wont continue'.no problem'I will update tom..if I get sufficient comments'
Thanks for reading..
Sorry for mistakes..
Hey'Back with next part, Thanks for the great response!!Glad you liked this FF'
I know'My 4th currently running one'But hey'No school so a lot of time to write!!
Sorry about mistakes'Please Enjoy!!
Bani-haan maa'appna cell phone on rakoongi'Appne Pia ko phone karke yaad diladiya na?
Kiran-Haan..diladiya! Yeh tu kya karahi hai??
Bani-Kuch bhi toh nahi'
Bani said as she secretly kept her laptop in her bag
Kiran-Arre laptop! Vahin bhi!
Bani-Mom..yeh laptop mere jaan hai!
Kiran-Patha nahi kya assa kya hai iss laptop main!!
Bani went up to Kiran who was holding Bani's dairy'and grabbed it from Kiran'
Kiran-Arre! Bani!!Tu 25 sal ki hai'assa kya hai tere dairy mein, jo main nahi janthi??
Bani-Kuch bhi toh nahi'Ab main chalthi hoon'Love you bye!!
Bani kissed Kiran on the check and slammed the door behind her'Rano was already in the taxi'
Rano-sab kuch le liya?
Rano-Ab bathao di'App sach main Mumbai kyun jarahi ho?Kam??Nah..mere di assi toh nahi thi'
Bani-(sighs)-Tujhe kya patha hai..?
Rano-Assa kuch bhi nahi jo appne mujhe nahi batha ho'Liken come on'you should be proud ki mamma bought it!!Par app mujhe toh sach batha hi sak thi hain'
Bani-Voh..(oh god Bani'Rano ko kuch bhi kehde)haan'shaddi se bag ne ke liye'You know'last year Pia bhi toh shaddi ke daar se bag gaye thi'
Rano-(mummered)-Liken Mumbai jakar kud shaddi kar rahi hai'
Bani-Tune kuch kaha??
The rest of the ride was quiet'but Bani's mind was in dream land..
I'm soo excited'I mean'Main ek asse insan se milne jarahi hoon, jise maine kabhie dehka nahi'liken diske bare main, main sab kuch janthi hoon'well at least it seems that way'thoda bura bhi lagtha hai'ki ma aur Rano se jhoot bol kar jarahi hoon'liken agar ma ko sach bathathi tho ma mujhe Mumbai toh kya ghar ke bhar be nahi jane dethi'Main teek tho karahi hoon na? Of course I am'yeh koi waqt nahi hai..appne app ko contradict karne ka'
Rano-Di..kya soch rahe ho'hum airport poonch gaye'Main under chaloon ki ghar jaoon?
Bani-Tu ghar ja aur ma ka kayal rakna'aur main tujhe Mumbai karthe phone karoon gi'
Rano-(hugging Bani)-Okay di..Love you bye!!
Rano reached home safely'
Kiran-(to herself)-yeh computer kaise band (close) karthe hain?
Rano-Ma'bouth bouk lage hai..kuch banado'
Kiran-Haan voh toh main kardoon gi..tu yeh computer band karde'
Rano-Kamal hai'di laptop legaye..liken jane se pehle computer use karrahi thi'
Rano looks at the computer screen'
Rano-(to herself)-Di ne appne email se logout bhi nahi kiya'Yeh di ka konsa email address hai? Maine toh kabhie nahi suna' CallmeBD@Hotmail.com 'Shayad naya hai'Liken inbox 209!!Wow'
Rano curiously clicked on Inbox'
Rano-Yeh kya'Sarre messages ek hi insan se..! PyarseJW@Hotmail.com Kamal hai'Ek kyon hai'
Rano opened one of the mails'The most recent'one which Bani had not even read'
Dear Rani,(the name which Bani had put as her real name in the profile)
Sorry kafi time se email nahi kiya'liken office main bouth kam tha'Keher I know no excuses'But I'm sure tumne mujhe bouth miss kiya hoga na'Ab bouth hogaya'I really want to meet you!! Agar tum nahi aye'toh promise'kuch dinoon main, main kud Bangalore ajjaoonga tumse milne!! Jo tumne mujhe last month gift beja tha'voh mere pass hai'har ross subhe sabse pehle use dehktha hoon'Shayad koi araha hai'Main chaltha hoon'
-tumhara Jeet(name which he had given in Profile)
Both know that those aren't there names..but pyar se they call each other that'
Rano-(mouth open)-Di neh'
Rano quickly flipped to a couple of mails'seeing that this 'guy' lived in Mumbai'
Rano-(to herself)-OMG'Di ne ithna bada jhoot'Voh bhi ma se'Phele toh laga tha ki, Pia ka sach jankar ma ko thoda sa shook hoga'liken ab Di ka sach bhi!! Di ithni stupid kaise hosak thi hain'Asse internet love main!! Hoga koi budha Punjab ke kisi gown main!! This is just ridiculous'
Kiran came to Rano with a plate of food, and Rano quickly turned the computer on hibernate'so that she wouldn't get logged off of Bani's email account'
Kiran-Yeh le kahle..
Rano-Nahi ma, abhi bouk nahi hai'Mujhe kuch kam hai'
Kiran-Chabi lekar janna, main mrs.Kaur ke ghar ga rahe hoon'
Bani-(at the airport)-(out loud to herslef)-Mere flight ' gante main hai'Oh god'main use milne jarahi hoon'Okay Bani relax'Mumbai jakar har insane ko tumhara jeet maath samaj lena'Main appne Jeet ke bare main sab kuch janthi hoon'sirf naam nahi janthi'
Rano-(also there now)-what rubbish di!! You've lost it!
Bani-(turning around)-Rano..tu yahan?
Rano-Bathao na di..app appne so called Jeet ke bare main kya janthi hai??Usska naam??
Bani-Dehko Rano tum nahi samajthi'
Rano-Bathao na..Di main kya nahi samajthi!!??Jab app uska asli naam tak nahi janthi tho'
Bani-Rano!!Naam sab kuch tho nahi hotha na'Main uski puri family ko janthi hoon'
Bani-Unki ek badi behan hai..Jigyasa'aur Aditiya'unka sabse acha dost hai'aur Jigyasa ka pathi'Aur unka ek choota bhai hai'sahil'aur ek aur bhai Nachikeit'Unki ek Masi se'jo unki Ma se bhi badi hai'Aur unka ek butler tony bhi'
Rano-(finding this stupid)Di'just listen to yourself'kya pagal pan hai yeh..Aur Mumbai jasse ithne bade shaher main'app iss insan ko kaise dundegi'
Bani-Mujhe uski naam ki koi zaroorat nahi hai'Agar mere pyar sacha hai toh voh mujhe zaroor milega'
Rano-(finding this even more unreasonable)-App iss kuch mahine ke jhoot ko Pyar kehthi hain?Aur konsa gift diya tha appne use?
Bani-Yaad hain hum ek madir gaye the'duniya ka voh ek mandir jahan Ram ji ki morthi akeli milthi hai'Sitaji ke bina'Voh morthi maine unhe dithi'
Rano-Achha fine'aur unhone appke liye kya beja?
Bani-(showing her wrist out)-yeh bracelet!!
Rano-Oh god di! Jin diamonds par appko bouth naz hai..asse hazar bracelets street way, sabzi mandi par milthi hai'10 rupee main'
Bani-Mujhe use kuch farak nahi padtha'Liken asse sirf EK bracelet hai!!
Bani flipped the bracelet over revealing the monogram on it'
Flight Number 211 abhi uraan ke liye tayaar hai'All passengers please report to check in'Gate #7
Bani-(getting up, putting her bracelet back on)-Ab main chalthi hoon'
Rano-Di'app phir bhi jarahi haan?
Rano-(mad)-yaad rakna appne mere baath nahi sune Di'Yeh internet ka jhoota pyar'sirf appko dard dega!!Aur kuch nahi!!Main jarahi hoon'
I hope you guys liked it..I know..Jai isn't here yet'But don't worry'ayyega!!
Bani boarded the flight with a heavy heart'Rano had never spoken to Bani in that manner'Not even when they fought'which was seldom'Bani decided to put that behind her and prove her wrong'She was going to show Rano and 'Jeet' wasn't some rubbish but a warm hearted man, and her love!!!
Lets go back'back'about 6 months..before Jai and Bani had started talking online'Except this time lets go to WM'Mumbai'Dec.31st'2007
Jigyasa-Hey'get some flowers on that side of the hall..Looks like day and night here!!Its a New Year party not a barsi! Oh god'Jai bhaiya'abhi tak office main!!
Masi-Kyun gusa kar rahi hai'Ajjae ga..mujhse promise kiya hai ussne..
Jigyasa-Sana'sana ko bulaya hai na appne'?
Masi-Haan..bulaya hai'liken mere Muna ko pareshan maath karna'Uski marzi hogi'
Jigyasa-Voh toh obviously hogi'liken panditji neh kaha hai ki bhai ke pure kundali main kuch ki ase din hai'jab voh pyar main pad sak the hain'EK toh aaj'aur next teek 6 months are 4 din main'July 4th ko hoga'
Masi-Tu bhi kya manthi hai Jigyasa'
Jigyasa-Kya karoon Masi'jab bhaiya shaddi hi nahi karthe'toh yeh sab toh mana hi partha hai'28 sal ke hogayeen hain'
Masi-Karlega voh'jab usshe voh miljaye gi'
Anu-(Aditiya's sister)-Bhabi!!Main konsi dress peno??Yeh Blue wali..ki green wali??
Jigyasa-Green wali'abhi ja..mujhe bouth kam hai'
Jai-(hearing a knock at his door)- WHAT!!
Aditiya-(coming in)-Jai'chaleen'its almost 10:00pm'
Jai-(looking at him in fury)-I would not like to be disturbed when I am working'
Aditiya-Come one Jai'Its new years eve'Ghar main party hai'The least you could do is attend it'
Jai-I'll be there'just'go on without me..
Aditiya-Okay'but if your not there Jigyasa will have my head'
**Jai hated parties'he didn't like being social at all'Like it would kill him'Marriage was the last thing on his mind'He was a pure workaholic'Besides work Jai's only hobby was working out'He loved to go to the gym'He did it almost professionally'Jai had a built body'but not crazy with muscles'Jai loved his family'but wasn't to expressive with words..Things like I love you'was usually not something you heard from Jai Walia'Around the office, he was anything but lenient. All his employees feared him'
To avoid the party tonight Jai had to think of something'But what to do in an empty office'Jai sat there after Adi left'deciding to surf the web'He got really bored when it hit 1100pm'To many calls on his cell phone made him mad'and he sent a message to Adi..to handle everything'and Jai turned off his phone'
Jai went online'and went to some random chat club'On Aditiyas email Id'**
Jai randomly wrote'
Aditiya-(which is actually Jai)So anyone here'
Bani-Hey look'someone online'(ON RANO'S EMAIL ACCOUNT)
Aditiya-(really Jai)-So'why aren't you at some new years eve party?
Rano-(really Bani)-Why aren't you?
Aditiya-I asked first!
Rano-Well..I had no one to go with'and honestly my mom would probably have some guys waiting there for me'you know shaddi and all'
Aditiya- Your Indian?
Rano-Yup'Bangalore, India..What about you??
Aditiya-Mumbai, India'So I guess we have similar problems'I'm pretty sure my masi would have some girl waiting for me at the party as well'
Rano-So your name is Aditiya?
Aditiya-And your name is Rano?
Rano-I asked first!
Aditiya-Fine! No'its not'its my best friends account'
Rano-oh'Well..This is my sisters account'
Aditiya-So whats you name?
Rano-Why should I tell?
Aditiya-True!Well I guess your bored talking to me'like mostly, no actually all the girls I know get'
Rano-why are you saying that'I like talking with you'
That night both Jai and Bani made new email addresses..one which only they knew of, Jai missed the party'and got home around 300am'after his last word with Bani'
callmeBD-Happy new year once again'
PyarseJW-Same to you'
CallmeBD-toh kal baath kareengeh?
PyarseJW-Of course!!Bye Rani..
CallmeBD-My ma is coming'bye'Did you just call me rani?
PyarseJW-Well, I guess I did'tumhe koi problem..
CallmeBD-Nah'call me what ever you want'Bye'
When Jai got home that night'He had a strange smile on his face' as if'something inside him'felt complete'He felt like he had something to look forward to'talking to his Rani!!As Jai was trying to tiptoe his way up the stairs'
Jai-(the lights went on)-Hi di'
Jigyasa-Happy new year'
Jai-(happy he didn't get yelled at)-Happy new year di'
Jigyasa-(in a low)-Sana aye the'
Jai-(releasing how mad Jigyasa was)-Sorry'di'
Jigyasa-(surprised, that he said sorry)-Kya? Nahi I'm sorry bhai'main toh bus appko assas dilana chathi thi'ki app aaj party main nahi aye'App teek tho hain'I mean..App aur sorry'
Jai-(feeling weird that he said sorry)-Um..well I guess I am sorry'
That night'Jai sleep well'Like the 1st time he sleep in his life'
That was the first time'But now...6 months later'Jai's different A lot different!!!!!!
Peon-may I come in sir..
Jai-Of course you may!!
Peon-(gave Jai tea)-App ke liye sir'
Jai-(sipping it)(he began to cough)-What is this?
Peon-Sir, Apple tea sir'
Peon-I'm 'soo sorry sir'
Jai-(after taking medication)-No problem'
-After that whole incident'
Aditiya-(in his head)-For the past 6 months'Jai has been acting rather nice'Strange na'
Jai-kya soch raha hai'?
Aditiya-Kuch nahi'Main chaltha hoon'
Jai-(checking his mail)-kamal hai..Rani ka koi mail nahi ayya'kahin voh mujhse naraz toh nahi hai'Shayad use kuch bejna chahiyeh'um..Flowers'usske PO box ko bejdoonga'jispar bracelet begi thi'
Jai-(calling florist)-Yeah..hi..can I get a dozen roses to PO box 7890'
Aditiya-(hearing this)-Jai kisse roses bej raha hai..? Aaj toh kisi ka birthday bhi nahi hai'
Rano-(on the computer)-Kya karoon..Ma ko bathoongi toh pareshan hojayegi'Kya karoon..
Man-Yeah'kya yeh Bani Dixit ka number hai'
Man-Kya app Bani Dixit hain?
Rano-(thinking)-Haan'main Bani Dixit hoon'
Man-Appne jo PO box kola tha na'usme usshe PO wale na'appke liye phool beje hain..!
Man-Haan'aur shayad ek chiti bhi'
Rano-Teek hai'main abhi athi hoon'
Rano quickly went to the near postoffice'Discovering that this was the PO box where that man had given Bani the bracelet'
Rano-(taking the flowers)-Thanks'aur voh letter..
Rano took the letter..She went and sat at a step of the Post office'opening the letter'
Lagtha hai mujhse todhi naraz ho'ab gusa choro aur ek ache news suno'I think ab humhe ek dusre se voh akri baath kedeni chahiyeh'Jo hum ek dusre ke bare main nahi janthe'Aur voh hai'Naam'Wase main kuch nahi bathaoonga'Pehle tum!
-I hope tumhe flowers pasand ayyethe'Wase aaj yellow roses beje'
-Ab gusa thuk do..
-Tumhara JEET'only until next time'
Rano-(crumpling up the paper)-Di toh already vahin hai'Ab main kya karoon'Main nahi chathi ki mere di ko koi bhi takleef poonchae'I'm sure is budhe ne di ko email bhi kardiye hoga'Aur di ithni bole hain'agar unhone yeh bathadiya ki voh Mumbai main hain'toh, toh kya hoga'Aaj kal ithne rapist'nahi nahi main assa nahi soch sak thi'
Rano went home'worried as hell'That, that man wanted Bani's address to rape her or something'She looked at the clock..
Rano-Abhi tak tho di ne land nahi kiya hoga'
Couple of hours later'
Bani-(seeing that they arrived in Mumbai)-WOW!!Main Mumbai main hoon'Usske city main'I'm sooo excited'
Bani left the airplane'and went toward baggage claim'When she got out of the airport'She felt kinda like this'(link on bottom)
Socha kahan tha yeh jo yeh jo ho gaya
mana kahan tha yeh yo yeh yo ho gaya
chimti koi kaaton na hai ham toh hosh mein
kadmon ko thaamon yeh hai udte josh mein
badal pe paaon hai
ya chhoota gaaon hai
ab toh ghar chal padi
apni yeh naaon hai
ye ye ye ye ye
ho ho ho .............
Chal pade hai hamsafar
ajnabee toh har dagar
lagta humko magar
kuchh karne ke hum agar
thaame jo dikhaa par tha chhipa
bas jaaye woh nagar
re re re re re
badal pe paaon-------naaon hai
ye ye ye ye ye
aasmaan ka swaad hai
muddat ke baad hai
sehma dil dhak dhak kar
yeh din hai ya yeh raat hai
hae too mehrbaa kyo ho gaya
waah khuda kyaa baat hai
(badal pe----------------Naaon hai)
If u haven't heard the song..Please listen..gives a better feel'
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Pia-(looking for Bani'and finding her lost(in dreamland)-DI!!!
Bani-(coming out of dreamland)-Pia!!Hi'
Pia and Bani hug'
Bani-Aw'I missed you soo much!!
Pia-Me too'Mujhe appse bouth baath karni hai'
Bani and Pia got into a car'
Bani didn't want to talk to Rano..since she knew Rano might tell Pia'
So Bani texted Rano'
Hey'In Mumbai'Ma ko please maath bathana..main kud time par bathadoongi'Aur yaad rakna..tum mere chooti behean ho'chooti raho!
I really love you'
Pia-Kya karrahi ho di?
Bani-Kuch nahi'bus Rano ko text karrahi hoon'ki main poonch gaye'
Pia-Oh'wase ma, Rano..kaise hain'?
Pia-(in her head)-Kya main di ko, shaddi ke bare main bathadoon??Ya phir'nahi'abhi acha time nahi hai'
Bani-Aur, yahan tumhara fashion line kaise chal raha hai'
Pia-Actually Di, bouth acha chal raha hai'kafi paise ban rahein hain'And I'm being appreciated by many designers'
**Pia moved 1 year ago, to Mumbai'since she heard Kiran mentioning'that she had 2 daughters ready for marriage'Pia always had a dream to be a designer'and coming to Mumbai'her dream was fulfilled'**
Bani-Chalo that's good to know'Wasse..ek baath puchoon Pia?
Bani-Voh..agar iss shaher main kisiko dund na hai'I mean agar kisi ki talash karni hai..toh kaise kar sak the hain?
Pia-Simple'Yahan ek website hai'vahan naam type karoo'aur bus address email'etc sab mil jatha hai'
Bani-Aur agar naam na patha ho toh??
Pia-Come on di...koi naam ke siva kaise doondega kissi ko?
Bani-Nahi Pia'agar email address ho toh?
Pia-Aur naam nahi hai?
Pia-Kisko dund ne ki baath kar rahe ho?
Pia-Di'!Mujhse maath chupana'! Main yahan ek sal se hoon'appki madath karsak thi hoon'
Bani-Teek hai..agar koi baath hogi'toh main zaroor bathaoongi'
Jai-(checking his mail)-Kamal hai'abhi bhi no mail'
Aditiya-(coming in)-Hey Jai'sorry to bother you yaar..liken kya baath hai?
Jai-Kya baath hai'mathlab?
Aditiya-Kuch nahi..good night'
Jai-(after adi left)-Night good kaise ho sak thi hai'mere din iss mail ke bina pura hi nahi hota!!...Main nahi soonga'
Pia-(opening the door of her apartment)-Di main shower lekar athi hoon..please make yourself confortable'
Pia's apartment was cute'Bani walked around speculating her surroundings'The living room was nice and big'gave a welcoming feeling'There was a small Tv'on a glass stand'and two soft manikins'with unfinished dressed in the center'The coffee table in the center of the room was square..also glass'which was probably a matching from the TV and dining table'Craps of cloth were scattered around the apartment'Bani noticed a cork board'against the main wall of the living room'
Bani went up to it'It had a calendar marked with different dates in which Pia had to complete her assignments'The cork board also had pictures of Pia at various parties'and Pics of Bani, Rano, Pia, and kiran'A few pics seemed to be missing'as the entire collage had some empty boxes'
Pia-Di'app jakar fresh hojaye'tab tak main ghar saf karthi hoon..I'm really sorry'subhe jaldi utithi..liken sirf appka room hi teek karpaye'
Bani-Nahi no problem'Main athi hoon'
Bani went in her room'and locked the door behind her'She opened her laptop and went to check her mail'On the top corner it said'ANOTHER USER LOGGED IN'Bani was confused'
Bani-Iss email ke bare main toh koi nahi jantha..toh phir..OMG..kahin Rano toh nahi'Maine toh socha bhi nahi ki use patha kaise chala'
Bani figured out it must have been rano'and changed her password'
She then checked her mail'There were no new messages'but one message'Came up..
ONE NEW MESSAGE!!
Bani clicked the message..
I guess tumhe phool ache nahi lage'Sorry..for anything I did wrong'Shayad tumhe voh letter pasand nahi ayya..Agar time mile toh please mujhe email karna'
Bani thought to herself'
OMG'Rano ko voh phool milehoonge..Aur uss letter main kya tha?
Rano-(looking at the computer)-Mujhe uss admi ko ek email begna chahiyeh'Yeh kehkar ki ab Di unse baath nahi karna chathi'Good idea rano!!
Rano began typing..
Sorry ki maine tumhe email nahi kiya'Liken Main ab tumse koi rista nahi rakna chathi'Main tumhe tumhara bracelet bhi lotadoongi'Ab mujhe kabhie email maath karna'
Rano-(read the letter aloud)- Goodjob Rano'Ab Di hurt honese bach jaeengi..
Rano-Ayye'Just got to press send'
Kiran-(coming into the room)-Kya hai beta'kahana tanda ho raha hai'
Kiran went up to the computer and pressed the off botton'
Rano got up and shrieked!!
Rano-Mom!!yeh appne kya kiya!?
Kiran-(as she was leaving the room)-computer bad main use karna! Tub hi appni di ki tarha hogayi hai'voh bhi computer par bethi rehthi hai'
Rano looked at the computer in horror'What if the hotmail account had logged her out??What would she do? Darn..if only she had sent the email'Rano turned the computer back on'and went to the living room to eat'When she returned'she looked on her screen it read..
Password successfully changed'You may now Log-in'
Rano looked at the computer'reading the message'She grew angry'Bani changed the password??
Rano-Ab main kya karoon??Iss se acha koi rasta nahi tha!
That entire night'Sleep overcame Rano'She tossed and turned..unitl she hit an idea!!
Rano-(in the middle of the night)-Got it!
Rano went to her computer'and began to type a message'She looked serious'up until she pressed send'
Rano-Ab maine send kardiya!!
The next morning'
Pia-Good morning di'
Person-abhi tak tumne apni di ko nahi bathaya?
Pia-Nope..waiting for the right moment'
Person-Well, then until then I'm not talking to you..
Pia-P..come on!Okay fine chaloo bye'
Bani-Who was that?
Pia-Uh'di koi nahi'
Pia-Well, sorry to cut you in between'liken mom told me ki aap kam karne aye hain..toh today..since mujhe out of station jana hai..appko main ek file doongi'aur basically appko present karna hai'So meeting is at 1200pm..Okay'Walia Industries..Bye di..love you'
And that was the last of Pia'for that day atleast'
Bani-(out loud)-Oh god'kya stupid excuse tha'Ma mujhe kam karna hai!...Ab aaj kam karna padega'I really wanted to look for Jeet..but guess not today..Chal Bani 'walia Industries'
Bani headed for Walia Industries'With Pia's file..containing the designs'
Bain walked in WM'
Bani-Excuse me'Mr.Walia ka office?
Secretary-Go straight'it's the last door on the left'But Miss'Appke pass appointment hai?
Bani-Yeah'Pia Dixit'Dixit Fabricants'
Secretary-Oh..Okay maam..Please go in'Sir is expecting you'
Bani walked down the hall and entered the door to her left'
Jai was sitting perplexed'Looking deep into his computer'
Jai-Kya tum main tameez nahi hai?
Jai-haan'kya tumhe ithni tameez nahi kit um kisi ke cabin main anne se phele knock karthe hain? Aur voh bhi Jai Walia ke cabin main'
Jai-Please leave'aur knock karke aao'
Bani-(Bani would have told him off, but since this was for Pia she counted backwords and left the room)'
She knocked the door this time'
Bani-(gritting her teeth)-May I come in?
As Bani was about to walk into his cabin'Jai stopped her..
Jai-Actually I have to attend an important meeting'I'll be back soon'so you can wait for me outside my cabin'
Bani-But..I have an appointment'
Jai-Toh? Aggar appko jana hai'toh jasak the hain'
Bani-(realzing she cant let Pia down)-Okay I'll wait'
Jai-Outside my cabin!
Bani sat on the built in sofa outside Jai's cabin'Bani sat there not 1 not 2 not 3 but 4 hours!! Jai made her wait'She cursed under her breathe'
Kya kya nahi karna partha'Family ke liye'Oh god'Please help me'Milne do iss Mr.Walia ko'asse band bajaoongi'zindagi bhar appna naam bol jaye ga'
Aditiya was about to enter Jai's cabin'When..
Bani-Please wait'Mr.Walia abhi appne cabin main nahi hain'
Bani-VOh kisi zaroori meeting main gaye hain'Aur main pichle 4 hours se wait karahi hoon'Toh pehle main Mr.Walia se miloongi..
Aditiya-Nahi nahi app galath samajrahi hain'Main Mr.Walia ka partner hoon'I'm Mr.Bali'
Bani-Nice to meet you'
Meantime'Jai came'entering his cabin'
Aditiya-Please come in'
Bani-Nahi'I have to knock first'
Aditiya went in and Bani knocked'
Bani sat down in front of Jai and Aditiya'and showed them Pia's designs'
He was about to tell her she has gotten the assignment'When Jai cut him off'
Jai-App Ms.Pia Dixit hain right?
Bani-Ji Nahi'main Pia ki bade bahein hoon'Bani Dixit'Maine Dixit Fabricants ko join kia hai'
Jai-(leaning back in his chair)-And why do you think we should pick your companies designs?
Bani-Well honestly they are the best designs..and just because they represent your company'Right now even though Walia Hotels are the best and the biggest there staff's uniforms don't really represent the country that the hotel is in'Like your uniforms in Malaysia are the same as in Mumbai'How would a person differentiate'?
Jai wouldn't admit it but he was impressed'
Aditiya-(without letting Jai say anything)-That will be all, You have gotten the assignment'Congratulations'
Bani stood up and shook hands with Aditiya'when she extended her hand to Jai'He just sat there'Bani rolled her eyes inwardly and just left'
Bani-(in the taxi-murmuring our loud)-What does that Mr.Walia think of himself'uh...Thank god mujhe uss Mr.Walia ke saath kam nahi karna padega'God knows what his problem is!
Back at WM'Earlier that morning'Before Bani came'
Jai-(logging on to his email)-What the hell!!
What Jai saw on his screen'
IF you are seeing this message'Your Hotmail account has been temporarily been frozen'You have been reported as a Spammer'
In 3-8 weeks your account will be reactivated'Thank you for your understanding'-Hotmail team'
Jai-What the hell is this!!3-8 weeks'uh'
Just then Bani walked in'
Rano-Maine uss Jeet ka account hi freeze karwadiya'and all it took was one mail'Aur ab di ka email bhi freeze karwadiya'
Kiran-Kya freeze karwadiya?
Rano-Kuch nahi ma'
Kiran-Beta'Bani ke liye rista ayya hai'
Kiran-Meri dost ke bete ka'
The phone began to ring
Kiran left the room'
Kiran-Main Coffee lekar athi hoon'
Bani-(mad)-Tune mera email account kyun freeze karwaya??
Rano-Come on Di!! Ab issme mere kya galthi hai??Appne ithne mahine ek ajnabee se baath ki'Aur phir ushe doond ne ki liye Mumbai chale gaye? Aur on top of that iss sab ko app pyar kehthi hain?
Bani-Dehk Rano'just because humhari soch alag hai..doesnt mean ki tum mera account hi freeze kardo'Wait kya tumne Jeet ka bhi account?
Rano-Haan di'ab app usshe bhool jao'
Kiran snatched the phone'
Kiran-Yeh kya pagalpan hai??Ladka??kyon hai??Aur tu phone par baath karthi thi'
Bani-mom??Rano!!Tune mom ko bathadiya'!
Kiran-Ussne mujhe kuch nahi bathaya'Maine kud sab kuch suna'Kyon hai yeh??
Bani-oh god..mom please shant hogaye main use internet par baath karthi thi'
Kiran-Toh tu uss ladke ko doondne le liye gaye hai!! Pagal ho gaye hai..chal vapiss aaja'
Bani-Mom!!Main vapiss nahi aaongi'
Bani-Look mom'agar humhara milna lika hoga'toh hum mileengeh'Mujhe usski naam ki bhi zaroorat nahi hogi'
Kiran-Aur agar voh tujhe nahi milega?
Bani-toh main ghar vapiss ajayoongi'
Kiran-Aur shaddi kar legi
Kiran-Main tujhe 2 weeks dethi hoon'Agar in 2 weeks main tujhe voh nahi mila'toh tu vapiss akar..mere pasand ke ladke se shaddi karle gi!
Bani-Mom'app jante hain ki that's not fair!
Kiran-Bol na'haan ya na'
Bani-Fine! Mujhe appne pyar par pura barosa hai'fate mujhe appne pyarr se milwakar rahegi'
--Kiran hangs up..
Rano-Kya hua mom?
Kiran-Pagal ho gaye hai'Aur tu!!(pulling Rano's ear)..Ithna sab kuch hogaya'tune mujhe nahi bathaya!!
Kiran-Main toh shaddi ki tayariaan shuro kardoongi'
Rano-liken mom'appni di ko 2 weeks ka time diya hai'
Kiran-Beta'Main usski dushman nahi hoon'Main yahi chathi hoon'kit um teenon kush raho'Liken beta..Internet par pyarr nahi miltha!Asse ladke thodi na milthe hain'
Rano-(In her head)-Jab ma ko Pia ke bare main patha chale ga'tab toh voh pagal hojayeengi!...
Rano-Ma'app please shant hogaye'appka BP high hojayega'
Kiran-(upset)-Main'appne kamre main hoon'
Kiran sat in her room'wondering about her upbringing'Was life without a father'what lacked in disapline? Nishikant was Kiran's hadband'and a member in the Indian Army'Unfortunatley shorty after Rano's birth'He died in a terrible mission'
Kiran-Patha nahi kya hogaya'Mere parvarish main hi koi kami rehi hogi'Aur assa bhi nahi hai ki maine inpar shaddi ko thopa'Kabhie kabhie jab ache rishte ajjathe the'thab kehdethi'Liken Mrs.Chadda voh toh appni charoon betiyoon ki shaddi 21 sal main hi karwadi'Aur Rano tho 22 ki hogaye hai'Pia bhi 23 ki hai'Aur Bani 25 ki hogaye'
Bani-Oh god'ab Ma ko patha chal gaya hai'Aur mere pass sirf 2 hafte hain'
Pia-Di'(closes her eyes briefly)Mujhe appse kuch bath karni hai
Pia-Voh, kuch nahi
Bani-Are you sure?
The next day Bani began her mission to look for Jeet'But boy was she unsuccessful'She didn't know where to begin!!An entire week passed by'but she finally found him!!
Bani looked at an invitation card'It was a grand ball'With mostly all the people in Mumbai'The party was going to be huge!!Pia had the flu'and told Bani to go for her'Bani was sure that Jeet would be there'The party was Friday'July 4th'The last day that Bani would be in Mumbai,..before Kiran would have her back home'and married!!
Bani knew she would fine him there, she could feel it'
The week passed by fast'especially since Bani was soo exicted about Friday July 4th'Pia was definitely having problems'She would be fighting with someone over the phone all the time'
Bani was getting ready'She was wearing a pinkish cream colored staples dress..with a silver outlining'She had her hair down in light curls'Close to no makeup, just alittle kajal'She had a yellow rose attatched on the side of her dress'
Pia-(coughing)-Di'your looking hot'
Pia-Look di'honeslty I believe in you'Agar appko appne pyar par barosa hai'Toh voh appko zaroor milega'promise'
Pia wasn't usually the lovey dovey kind'but she could understand her sister'and hoped that she would find him'
Pia-Good luck'Aur ek baath yaad rakna'Agar voh appko nahi mila..toh no problem'Just have a lot of fun today'You never know'this might be the last party before your wedding'
Pia-Just kidding di'wase yeh yellow flower?
Bani-(smiled)-Maine aur Jeet neh baath ki thi ki agar kabhie hum milenge'toh mere pass ek yellow rose hoga'
Pia-aur app unhe kaise?
Bani-Unke coat par unke initials like honge'
Pia-wow'well bye'love you!!
Bani was driven to Bali Party hall'The party was being given by Mr. and Mrs.Bali'
When Bani entered the party hall'
Man-Hello Maam, good evening'Please take a mask'and a wrist band'
The mask Bani wore'
Man-Please maam, enter the hall'
Bani-appne bathaya nahi'Band kyun?
Man-sorry maam, you'll have to wait and find out'
The hall was filled with people'at least a thousand Bani thought'
Bani-(to herself)-Ab main ithne badi party main Jeet ko kaise doondoongi...
Bani-Hi'Main Bani'Bani dixit..
Jigyasa-oh..how nice of you to come'Please have a drink'
Bani walked around'Aquanting herself to people'being amible' Bani tried having fun..and not focusing on Jeet'
While walking toward the snacks she bumped into someone'
Bani felt her face go pail'
Kiran-Haan..aaj tera akri din hai'
Kiran-beta..tere shaddi ki tayarioon ke liye Mumbai agaye'
Kiran-Beta..tu mane ka na mane main tujhe appne kismat ke pass lekar jarahi hoon'
Bani-Mom'mere kismat main kud doondloongi'
Kiran-Acha chal'yahan bahess nahi kareengeh'Main chalthi hoon'
Afte that Bani was kinda low'
Mr.Bali-Main ek announcement karna chatha hoon'
The hall became quiet'
Mr Bali-Thank you all for coming'and I would like to announce my good friend'and business partner's wedding'Jai Walia'
The hall clapped.
Bani-How funny'bechari'jo Mr.Walia jaise karoos aur bathameez insan ke saath shaddi kare gi'
Mr.Bali-Jai unfortunaley could not make it to the party..but please enjoy'and don't leave without dinner'
DJ-Alright..please enjoy the snacks'and remember no taking off the masks'We will continue some more party fun..after this short break'
Songs were playing'and Bani was just sipping some juice..when someone came and stood near her'She turned around..
Bani-Nice to meet you'
Pushkar-Same here..So'you know Jai?
Bani-No'and frankly I don't want to'why do you?
Pushkar-Yeah I do'we're friends..
Pushkar-He didn't want to come'but god knows how I forced him'
Pushkar's phone rang..
Pushkar-I don't want to talk to you..
Pia-Come on..I have the flu'
Pushkar-(serious)-Are you okay'yehi hota hai when you don't take care of yourself'
DJ-Okay..now everyone has a number on there on there wrist band'I'll give everyone 10 minutes to go find the person in the hall with the same number as them'and no cheating..!!
Bani looked at her band..it said 98..
Aditiya-Come on Jai'you just got here..please for me'its just one dance..it wont kill you'
Aditiya-Kamal hai..ithna badlav ek insan main voh bhi 6 months main'kuch din phele toh teek tha'phir kya hua??
Aditiya-(got cut off)
*ALL THE GUYS HAD MASKS TOO*
Bani-Excuse me'kisi ke pass 98 number hai??
Aditiya-(looking at Jai's hand)-Yes..he does'Now GO!!
Aditiya put Bani's hand in Jai's and they were off on the dance floor'
The song changed'
DJ-Okay..after a couple of songs'we will turn the lights off and unveil everyones faces'
The night seemed to melt away'
Kissa tera, teri daastan,
Chehra tera khud kare bayan,
Kisi se pyaar tujhe ho gaya,
Tu maan jaa,
Haan maan jaa'
Kahin naa laage mann,
Kya hai yeh sunapan,
Mujhe tum bata do,
Koi toh wajah do,
Har ghadi ab khayalon mein,
Keh raha hai koi,
Har ghadi mere khwabon mein,
Aa raha hai koi..
Is this love?
Maine naa jaana
Is this love?
Tu hi bata naa
Jai-(in his head)-Mere shaddi hone wali hai'liken main abhi bhi rani ke bare main soch rahi hoon'
Tune chuna ishq ka raasta,
Hum safar iss safar mein dudhta hai tu,
Bani and Jai were dancing to the music'
Bani was looking at Jai'Actually they were both looking deep into each others eyes'
The song is from Kismat Konnection'Must listen..If haven't heard!!
Haan baat yeh maan bhi le zara,
Tut kar ab kisi ko chahta hai tu,
Raat din meri needon mein,
Jag raha hai kio
Raat din meri aankhon mein,
Bass raha hai koi
Is this love?
Maine naa jaana'
Is this love?
Tu hi bata naa
I need you,
You need me,
You are with me
Is this feeling of love?
Inside our hearts..
Bani and jai continued to look into each others eyes'
Tune tera dil kisi ko diya,
Baat yeh sach hai gar tu maan le isse,
Dil ka sukun tune hi kho diya,
Ab haqeeqat hai yeh tu jaane le isse,
Aajkal meri chahon mein,
Dhal raha hai koi,
Aajkal meri saason mein,
Chal raha hai koi..
Is this love?
Maine naa jaana..
Is this love?
Tu hi bata naa
Kahi naa lage mann,
Kya hai yeh sunapan,
Har ghadi ab khayalon mein,
Keh raha hai koi,
Har ghadi mere khwabon mein,
Aa raha hai koi..
Is this love?
Maine naa jaana
Is this love?
Tu hi bata naa
The song was almost over'when Jai noticed the yellow rose at first he thought it was a coincident 'but then he saw the bracelet'(in his head)-This has to be her'
and Bani moved her hand'relvealing the JW intitails on his coat'
Jai-(sametime in head)-yeah..Rani'
Bani-Jai-(in head)end of song jab mask kule ga'tab main Jeet/Rani ko bathadoongi/a
When the song ended'
They kept dancing'as the music continued to play...except now closer'Jai pulled Bani closer to him, and Bani rested her head on his shoulder'Neither of them wanted the night to end'
Surely the night did end'and Jai and Bani were oblivious to the rest of the world'
--The music stopped'
DJ-Now the light will go off, please take off your masks'
The lights went off'Jai and Bani pulled away from each other'
Aditiya pulled Jai off the dance floor'
Jai-(took of his mask and opened his eyes)-WHAT THE HELL!!
Aditiya-Kya hua?'I took you out of that torture..I know you didn't want to dance'
Jai turned around..looking frantically between all the people'he needed his rani'
He went up to the DJ'
Bani-(stood there with her mask off)
Pia-(grabed Bani, and took her outside)
Bani pulled away from Pia's grip
Pia-Di'Mujhe app se kuch kehna hai'
Bani-(without really getting what Pia said)-Mujhe mera Jeet milgaya!!
Bani-(pia was about to hug her when)
Bani-What the hell??Tum'tumne shaddi karle??
Jai-(on the mike)-I would like to make an announcement'Rani!!Rani!!Kahan ho tum?
Aditiya-Yeh Jai ko kya hogaya??
Pia-haan di...I'm married!!But app abhi under jao'You have to get Jeet'warna Mom'woh appko wapiss Bangalore buladeengi'
Bani ran inside'but by then Jai(jeet) had left..He gave up'and called his life pathetic'
Bani also looked frantically for Jeet'but she couldn't find him'
Bani-(tears brimmed in her eyes)-Ab main Jeet ko kahan??
Bani looked at the watch'it was 1200am'meaning her perfect night'with jeet was over..and now her mom would get her married off if she didn't find Jeet'
Bani went outside disheartened'She sat on a bench infront of the hall'
She sat there and thought aloud'
'Please bagwanji'Mere help kardo'Mujhe mere pyarr se milwado''
Suddenly out of the blue a lady came and sat next to Bani'
Lady-Kya mangrahi hai bagwan se?
Lady-Beta, just do what your supposed to, and god will do what he's supposed to'Okay'
What the lady said was so simple'but'made sense'
Bani was about to say something to the women'but when she turned the women was gone'
'Thanks for the message god!!Got it loud and clear'Wase I had the best day ever god!!'
Bani called for a cab and went home'She tried looking for Jeet but it didn't work!!
Jai-(drinking)-(backyard of WM)-main appni sari zindagi karoos, banke rehgaya'Liken Rani'ussne mera sara gussa nikaldiya'Log mujhe ek achha insan samajme lage'Liken ab'Main vohi purana Jai Walia ban jaoonga'
Jai tried getting up'He was drunk'which caused him to sway'and fall'
Jai got up again'and walked into WM'where Tony helped him to his room'
The next morning'
Pia-(sitting on the bedside, next to Bani)-Di'(whispers)-Mom ko mere aur pushkar ke bare main nahi patha'main unhe aaj raat bathadoongi'okay'
Bani-(yawned'and got up)-Teek hai'Liken jo tune kiya voh teek nahi tha..
Pia-(looked down)-Ji di'
Kiran rushed into Bani's room'
Kiran-Arre bahi'ithni tayyarian karni hai'Kal flight hai'chalo..
Bani-(confused)-Kya hua ma?
Kiran-Beta'yahan Mumbai main ithni facilities hai'Arre meri badi beti ki shaddi hai'Kuch tho shauk(likings)mere bhi haan'Kafi sapne dehke hain maine appne beti ki shaddi ke liye'Maine phool vagera yahan se mangadiya hai'aur aaj mithai'
Pia-Mom..mithai tho Bangalore main bhi achi milthi hai'
Kiran-That's true'aur tum theenoon ko thodi shopping karwadoon'
Pia-Mom, relax'Di ki wedding aur engagement clothes main design karoongi'Baki haldi and so on'ki kapre hum bazaar se karedle geh'
Pia-Mom..rano kahan hai??
Now while this whole shaddi conversation was going on'Bani just sat in her bed'Completely bewildered!!
Rano-(running into the room, hugging Bani)-HEY DI!!
Kiran-Main breakfast yahin lekar athi hoon'
Rano-Di..I'm so excited'Wase..Pia..(whispering)-Puskar kahan hai??
Bani was shocked that rano knew!!But she was too confused to say anything!!
Kiran soon came with breakfast..They all ate'
Kiran-Kya hua Bani..tu nahi karahi'?Shaddi ke liye achi lagne chahiyeh..kuch kale..Phir shopping karne chaleengehh'
Bani wanted to say a lot but couldn't'All that came out of her mouth was
Kiran-(came close to Bani, and kissed her forehead)-Beta'I promise'Main koi assa kam nahi karoongi jisse tujhe kushi na mile'
When Kiran left the room, Bani finally poured her feelings out'
Bani-Yeh sab kya hai??Mom mere shaddi??Aur Pia tu bhi??Aur Rano'tujhe Pushkar ke bare main??Kya mujhe mere shaddi main koi hak nahi hai??
Pia-Di relax'Ma jo kareengi appke ache ke liye karengi'
Bani-Please Pia'just shut-up'agar ma ki choice par ithna barosa hai tho phir tune bagkar shaddi kyun ki??
--Kiran came in..She heard everything..standing outside the door'
Bani-(mouth open)-Ma..main..Mujhe Mera Jeet milgaya mom!!
Kiran held her heart'and soon the scene in front of her faded away'
At the hospital'
Pia and rano were crying'
Bani was just pacing feeling guilty'
Doctor-(came out of the room)
Bani-Kya hua? Is Mom okay?
Doctor-Don't worry Ms.Dixit'Shes fine just a minor heart attack'
Pia-(standing up)-Heart attack!!
Doctor-But please don't worry, shes fine'Just make sure she had plenty of rest'and that she stays away from stress..You can go in and meet her'
The doctor left and Bani looked at Pia and rano..
Bani-(stopped Pia from going inside)-Listen, hum nahi janthe ki ma neh kya suna'papa ke jane ke bad humari liye sirf ma hain'Isshi liye..Pushkar ki baath nahi karengeh..
--In side the room'
Bani began to cry'seeing Kiran with different needles in her'and in the hospital bed'She looked pale'
Bani-(blurted)-I'm sorry mom'Main aaj se appke sari bathe manoongi...Chalo..jaldi se teek hojayo'humhe Bangalore jakar shaddi ki tayarriyan bhi toh karni hai'Aap sach kethi thi mom'Zindagi sapno ke sath nahi..sach ke saath guzari gathi hai'
Kiran-(tears brimmed in her eyes)-meri pyari beti'Main tujhe nirash nahi karoongi'Tu bouth kush rahegi...vahan'
Bani-Pia-Rano all cried'and hugged Kiran'
Pia-Okay mom...Enough crying'Ab mujhe jakar di ki dress design karni hai'
Kiran-Mujhe Pushkar se kab milwaegi?
Pia-(eyes wide open)-Ji?
Kiran-Main use milna chathi hoon..
Pia ran to Kiran giving her a big hug
Rano-Main bill jakar barthi hoon'
Bani-(holding Kiran's hand)-Mom, main'appse ek question pooch sak thi hoon'
Kiran-(now had a huge smile on her face)-Pooch'
Kiran-(understanding what she meant)-Mere pyari dost ka beta'
Bani-Mom'main jakar bill dehkar athi hoon..
Bani saw Pia'outside helping Rano pay the bill
Bani-Pia'voh kyon hai??
Pia-(playfully hitting her)-Oh ho'ab jiju ka naam poocha daraha hai..
Bani-(serious look)-Batha na'
Pia-chalo nahi bathathi'
Rano-Main bathathi hoon'
Rano-Voh...Ma kaherahi thi'Mrs.Chadda ka beta'
Bani left from there..and went to Pia's apartment and began to pack'since they were going to leave tomorrow'She was soo shocked..I mean out of all the people in the world...Kiran was getting her married to Mrs.Chadda's son'Mrs.Chadda was Bani's neighbor and her only son was Rohit'Its not that he was a bad buy'but he was a total loser'He worked as an electrician'Bani knew he was a nice person'But was she supposed to spend the rest of her life with him..?
Bani-(while throwing things into the suitcase)-Maine bhi mom ko haan kehdi'Liken mom ko bhi toh sochna tha..ki main!!Mrs.Bani Rohit Chadda??Kuch toh sochthi'Its okay Bani'relax'Main mom ko kohna nahi chathi'Karle shaddi..wase bhi adjustments kisko nahi karne padthe'Aur on the positive side mom ke pass rahoongi'
Jai walia woke up'NEW and renewed Jai Walia'He was mean and brisk..and everything he was before'
Mukesh-May I come in sir'?
Mukesh-wish me best of luck Sir'Main aaj apne girl friend ko propose karne jaraha hoon'Aur appne jo loan diya tha..usse main ring bhi leli hai'Thank you Sir..apphi ke waje se..Main usske kareeb apaya'
Jai-(serious)-well'I do wish you good luck'Good luck in finding a job!!Becasue you're fired!! A man who puts his girlfriend before his work, is of no use in my company!!!
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