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Posted: 25 July 2008 at 8:40am | IP Logged
hey guys,     this is dolly.......i'm new on indiaforums....nd making a new fanfic on armaan- ridhimaa.............its my first fanfic........so plzzzz do comment....... here it goes........ . . Part 1....
(frm where armaan tells ridhima that he loves her when she is going 2 suicide...)
armaan:haan...mein tumse payaar karta hoon...bohoot pyaar karta hoon.....
ridhima: sachh?
armaan: haan baba...sachh...ab jaldi se upar aa jao...
(ridhima comes up...they hug each other....holding each other very tightly...)
ridhima:armaan...i'm sorry....meine tumhe jo bhi takleef di hai..uske liye...
armaan:its ok...woh sab bhul jao...i'm happy....ki hum phir se ek saath hain...
ridhimaa:haan...mein bhi...
armaan:ab chaleen....ya aur bhi koi timepass karna hai??
ridz: haan....chaloo....
(nd they go bach 2 the village..)
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guys plzzzz read nd tell me how it was....

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Posted: 25 July 2008 at 8:45am | IP Logged
hey guys,     i'm continuing nd posting 3 parts more.....as i had already wrtiien them... **the 2nd part is not written by me** Part 2
they reach the village holding hands tightly and enjoying each other's company like never b4. riddhi and her frend see them coming
riddhi- arre didi aapne pata hi liya bhaiyako kyun??? idea kaam aay na??
rid-huh?? nahi ....voh.. haan mera matlab
a- haan riddhi tum sahi keh rahi ho tumhari riddhima didi ne mujhe mana hi liya..
he looks at her showing his dimples while squeezing her hand tightly.
riddhi and the boy leave them alone and they go their place.
a-waise riddhima riddhi kaunse plan ki baat kar rahi thi ??he asked her once they were seated comfortably on the bed near to each othr.
r-armaan...
she gets scared thinking armaan wld get angry and probably get mad at her again....
 

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Posted: 25 July 2008 at 8:49am | IP Logged
Part 3...
the following day...they leave fr mumbai....
outside ridhima's house in the car... armaan: jaa rahi ho?? ridz: haan...jana to hai hi.....warna kal sanjeevni mein kaise milenge?? armaan: woh to hai...par tumse door jaane ka mann nahi kar raha.. ridz: mera bhi...par agar papa ne abhi hume dekh liya...to....problem ho jaegi.... armaan: theek hai...bye......baad mein phone karoonga... ridz..haan...bye...good night..
(nd he leaves....)
next day.......Sanjeevni....
Atul: armaan!!!!....tu kahan tha yaar...tujhe pata hai maine tujhe kitna
miss kiya......tere pichee se mein kitna akela ho gaya tha!!..
armaan: sorry yaar....abhi aa gaya hoon na....ab kahin nahi jaaonga..
anjali: hey armaan.....kahan gaye the??...aur kyun??
armaan: kuch nahi...bas aise hi....
(nd they all go fr their respective duties..)
after their armaan nd ridhimaa meet in the cafeteria.....others r busy wid their duties..
armaan: atlast tumse milne ka time mil hi gaya....
ridz: haan...mein tumhe bohoot miss kar rahi thi...
armaan: oye hoye!!!!...........accha hai.....

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Posted: 25 July 2008 at 9:08am | IP Logged
part 4...
armaan: oye hoyee!!....accha hai...
ridz: kya accha hai???....kaam mein to mera dhyaan hi nahi lag raha tha!!! armaan: kya baat kar rahi ho....phir to tumhara haal bilkul meri tarha hai!!....hehe.. ridz: stop it armaan!!!! armaan: accha theek hai......aaj raat ko kahin bahar chaleen???? ridz: bahar??? kahan????aur kaise??
armaan: haan..bahar.......kisi restrurant mein chalte hain....aur raha sawaal kaise to...chalke ya phir gaddi mein bhi chal sakte hain....aur agar tumhe chahiye to mein tume utah kar bhi leke jaa sakta hoon...
ridz: very funny!!!!......mera matlab tha...papa, di aur dadi ko kya bolongi??
armaan: keh dena ki duty thi...
ridz: accha theek hai...soochti hoon kya khena hai unse...
armaan: theek hai......phir shyaam ko milte hain....
ridz: theek hai...bye..(thinking)........aaj armaan ko koi surprise doongi.....uski pasand ki koi dress phenke jaaongi!!.....par di ko kya boolongi.....
(ridz place....)
ridz: papa....woh...aaj mujhe mere kuch friends ke saath bahar jaana tha....jaaon???
shashank: haan..woh to theek hai..par kahan??
ridz: woh..papa......hum logon ne decide kiya tha ki kahin bahar dinner karenge aaj.....
shashank: theek hai...jaao.....par apna dhyaan rakhna.....haan..mein tumhe batana bhul gaya..aaj raat ko anjali, mein aur ma..bahar jaa rahen hain...to dhyaan rakhna........
(ridz has done some shoppiing ....bought some hot dresses...but now is confused which 1 2 wear......)
ridz: kya pehnu?????.....pink wali...ya phir black....nahi white walli acchi hai....(then suddenly)......armaan ka favourite colour red hai....to woh red wali pehnungi......haan...ye wali best hai.....
(this is the dress she's goona wear......just imagine her in it..!
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ridz: mein theek to lag rahi hoon na......armaan kya kahega....(waiting fr armaan to come)...
armaan comes...nd hes waiting outside her house fr her..as ridz sees him..she rushes down...nd opens the door...armaan is stunned looking at her...she was looking sooo beautinful...
ridz: hi armaan....
he does not answer..as he is just busy staring her...
ridz: armaan!!!
armaan: haan...hiee..
ridz: kaisi lag rahi hoon??
armaan: bohot khubsurat.....beautifulll........tumse khubsurat ladki aajtak dekhi nahi maine...
ridz: (blushing).....
 
 
oke...guys..tell me how it was...it took me soo long 2 decide fr a dress fr her...nd found this 1 great......nyways...comment...
 

dolly_sweety

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Posted: 25 July 2008 at 11:01am | IP Logged
36 views nd not even a single reply!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..........................now thats discouraging!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.......................plz comment yaaaaa.......

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Posted: 25 July 2008 at 11:26am | IP Logged

really a nice oneStar so sweet please continue it soon

"Din beet jate hain suhani yaadein bankar,
Baate rah jati hai kahani bankar,
Par chahat to humesha dil ke pass rehegi,
kabhi muskan to kabhi ankhon ka pani bankar."

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Posted: 25 July 2008 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Embarrassed great part cont.. plzzz

arshluver_15

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Posted: 25 July 2008 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
its very cute i luved it plz cont soon

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