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Posted: 25 July 2008 at 12:49am | IP Logged
Hey guys.....this is my first attempt at a FF so please bear with me.
 
 

NUMBED WITH PAIN

The crowd went wild when they saw their favorite band "SUKOON" on the stage. But their wildness and excitement crossed all limits the moment their favorite rockstar was onstage. Girls were drooling over him and cheering him wildly while the boys were a little envious but at the same time they too were cheering him since they were also an ardent fan of his.

Riddhima and Muskaan were also amongst the crowd. Muskaan just like all other girls was cheering him frantically while Riddhima was suffocating and wanted to leave but she resisted the urge looking at her sister Muskaan's shining face.

Then he started to sing and all the girls caught their breath......

"OH JAANE JAAN..DONO JAHAN.....MERI BAHOOIN MEIN AA BHOOL JAA...HMMM......PEHLI NAZAR MEIN KAISA JADOO KARDIYA........TERA BAAN BAITHA HAI MERA JIYA.....JAANE KYA HOGA KYA HOGA KYA PATA... then as was the custom he caught one of the girl's hand and pulled her on stage. But this time something different happened.....generally the girl would go numb with excitement and would keep staring at him whereas this time it was he who went numb on seeing the beautiful face of the girl he had pulled up. They both were lost in each other's eyes......Riddhima was breathing heavily as she was nervous on being pulled up on stage in front of a huge crowd while he was bathing in her beauty and he felt that he had never in his life seen such beautiful pair of eyes.

He had stopped singing and the crowd too had went silent and Riddhima was the first out of the two of them to notice this. She nudged him once......twice.... and then a third time....He finally realized what he was doing and he immediately left Riddhima's wrist and facing the crowd continued the song......

"MAIN HO YAHAN TO HAI YAHAN.......MARI BAHOIN MEIN AA BHOOL JAA.......OH JANE JAAN DONO JAHAN MERI BAHOIN MEIN AA BHOOL JAA......."

Once again the crowd was wildly cheering him......Muskaan pulled Riddhimaa down from the stage and he saw them both leaving the hall. He lost the wish to sing but he continued nonetheless when he heard his fans cheering him......

"YAY ARMAAN WE LOVE YOU.......YOU ARE THE BEST....."

Armaan Malik was every girls dream and a Rockstar.

Please guys do leave a comment and criticism is more then welcome.


Edited by Raila - 23 August 2008 at 7:37am

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Oh! Woow ii really liked the concept..I dunt like AR much..but i wud def. wanna read ur FF.

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sounds interesting! plz continue

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Originally posted by *mansibhatia*

Oh! Woow ii really liked the concept..I dunt like AR much..but i wud def. wanna read ur FF.
 
Thanks for encouraging meSmileBig smile

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Originally posted by animegurl

sounds interesting! plz continue
 
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