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wooow need FF
can't wait for the first part
and plzzzzzzzzz PM me

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Posted: 25 July 2008 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sacred shrine

yay...i m the 1st 1 2comment...the last part where ridz handed armaan th jacket ws so cuteBlushing...he should go n sorry 2her n be frendz wth her...thn eventually fall in lve...Day Dreaming...aaahhh...perfect...
 
Thanks! Storyline's in your mind!
 
 
Originally posted by bhanu_rekhag

hey its really cooooooool... DMG n Narnia wow
so dr's r going 2 b magicians!!!

but i think its really very diff concept!!

continue!! hey just 4 heck of it try someother name from NArnia so that it looks completly ur story  rather tahn any one's... but if u don't get any name then u CAN CONTINUE with same name 4 magical words!!!!!

yaaa the trailer is nice.... so make the story now!!!!

 
Story's coming up and already thought of a name, I guess you all will like it!
 
 
Originally posted by dmglovernimisha

ab main kya kahun????......it wuz a good 1 ....i mustsay!!....continue jaldi karna!....thanks 4 the PM.....n yah narnia nahi kuch aur naam rakhna sumthing much much much more magical!!!!.......i luv the concept..
continue soon....n plz do PM me!
hats off!
tc
Luv
Nimisha
 
Thank you!!! Will PM you!
 
 
Originally posted by imdudehead

Nice Story, Fantasy Tongue
 
Seems very interesting
Cant wait to read more!
 
 
Thanks! Wait a little more!
 
 
Originally posted by kvn1983

nice yaar so sweet and different one superb please continue it soon

 

 
Thanks! Will continue!
 
 
Originally posted by *mansibhatia*

Awww...dat was really very sweet hunn..Ridz is soo sweett..nd so is Ammy..lol..hes cutee actually..after 2days epi..Magical word? Hmm..I actually didnt get dat partt!!
 
I hav heard ur a great writer..So im waiting for u2 continue!!
 
They 've magically entered in a new world. I'm a good writer but heard a lot about your RM FF!!
 
 
Originally posted by meow23

ridz is soo sweet n armi as usual careless.. luvd d rappo n d chemistry btwn dem.. gr88 prt.. thnxx 4 d pm.. update soonn.. n pm me nxt tym u update
 
Thanks! Both are the same! Will PM you!
 
 
Originally posted by swansea

wooow need FF
can't wait for the first part
and plzzzzzzzzz PM me
 
Thanks! Will PM you!

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Posted: 25 July 2008 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Hey Guys, 1st part! Things are still shaping up!
 
Chapter 1:
 

"Guys, Lets roam a little." Atul announced as he was getting bored.

"Ya, Come on." Anjali agreed, and so did everyone.

They walked along playing with the snow and soon they saw a house.

"See, there's a house." Rahul said.

"But its..." Ammy signaled to a broken door and some things outside.

"Broken?" Ridz asked and everyone hurried inside.

But before they could even enter someone came outside and they hid somewhere near the bushes.

"Where has he gone? I just don't understand."

Meanwhile, in the bushes.

"See that, I hear voices." Atul said as some sweet type of voice was being heard.

No one could check because of the tickling from the bushes pushed Ammy outside and the creature turned towards him.

"Who are you?" asked the little creature who happened to be talking to himself a while ago.

"I'm going mad, I'm hearing voices." Ammy got shocked to know that a little dwarf was standing in front of him and.. talking to him.

"Who are you?...Wait..You are a..human?" The dwarf asked after smelling him.

"Human? Ofcourse, it's logic."Ammy said, while making a face of of-course.

"There are no humans in Evgenia..Oh My God, I never knew I'd live up to see this day." The dwarf spoke with enthusiasm in his voice, it really looked he was excited.

"What are you talking about?" Ammy was now very scared, he was looking creepy in some rags and he thinks he is fortunate.

"Where are the others? You'll are supossed to be 6." he asked, looking around.

"Guys, come out, he knows we are here."Ammy shouted towards the bushes.

The dwarf was very surprised to see 6 humans in front of him. He looked towards everyone one by one and counted using the fingers.

"6 humans, 3 sons of Adam and 3 daughters of Eve. Oh My! Wait till Thomson sees them." the dwarf began walking and added. "Come on, I don't want the police to catch you."

"Police?" ridz asked, as far as she knew, in free places there isn't any police.

"Yes, police runned by foxes who now" he took his watch out and saw his small watch."will be in the Blueberry Forest."

"And which forest are we in now?" Again Ridz asked following him.

"We are in the most dangerous forest, the Ranger Forest. Hurry up, we need to walk long."

"Where are we going?" asked Rahul who was not very glad to go behind a dwarf.

"I will explain everything in my house, for now keep quiet and hurry." he told in a firm tone and everyone started walking.

Ridz was walking slow because of her heavy bag so Ammy moved behind and accompanied her. Atul and Anjali were engaged in a funny talk about trying to change the dwarf a little in his style and Rahul Muskaan were hand in hand seeing the surroundings. Armaan and Ridhima were walking but now and then their eyes met.

"Thanks for the jacket!" Ammy thanked her.

"Your welcome" Ridz turned to see the other side and sensed someone was in trouble.

"Guys, Someone is in trouble." Ridz informed everyone and ran towards the place.

After a while, Ridz finally found a centaur moaning in pain.

"Oh My God! Firenze, Who did this to you?" the dwarf crien and went towards the centaur.

"Help..me, Pl..ease." Firenze moaned in pain.

"Where were you attacked?" Ridz stepped forward and went towards Firenze.

"It my leg, the bone's...broken." Firenze cried again.

"Anjie, Check my bag. There are books, give them." Ridz shouted and Anjie went towards the bag.

"Ammy, help her." Anjie gave the books to Ammy.

Ridz took the books and placed it under his leg. Taking some books on her hand she pushed on the leg as Firenze cried.

"Breathe, The bone's OK, Just breathe properly." Ridz consoled him.

After a while, Firenze was stable and Ridz asked him to stand up. No longer Firenze stood up, he was walking properly, running perhaps.

"Thank you, I'm grateful to you, Your Majesty!" Firenze took her hand and kissed it but the last words made Ridz surprised.

"Your Majesty?" Ridz turned towards the dwarf.

"I forgot to introduce myself, I'm Nikabrik. And Firenze, accompany us. They don't know anything." Nikabrik informed Firenze who was very much shocked to know, that the people who are going to save them, don't know anything.

Again started the journey to the house of Nikabrik.

"You were wonderful out there." Ammy complimented Ridz and she blushed which Ammy noticed.

"Thanks!" Ridz thanked him.

They reached the house and someone was there to greet them.

"Where were you Nikabrik?, I've been waiting for ages." Another dwarf shouted at Nikabrik.

"Rogin, There's someone here to meet us." Nikabrik spoke with excitement in his tone.

"Humans! They're here. Now we'll be free forever." Rogin started dancing.

"Let them come inside" Nikabrik calmed him.

"Let's sit outside, they and me, we all will not fit in there" Firenze smiled and looked at the big Stone there.

"Then we should light a fire." Nikabrik hurried inside and got some logs and soon there was fire.

"So you all must be thinkingabout it, It so started before Evgenia started existing....



Edited by kdrs - 30 July 2008 at 11:03am

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Posted: 25 July 2008 at 11:04am | IP Logged
U KNOW IT KIND OF REMINDED ME ABT HARRY, RON, HERMOINE, HOGWARTS, ELFS, ..DUMBLEDORE,HAGRID
I JUS WENT 2 BAK HARRY PTTER.... IT WAS AMZNGG.. I CLD SOO EASILY VISUALISE D SCENES IN FRONT OF ME... TULY GR88888888.... 2222222222222222222222222222 GUDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
AMZNGGG N MINDBLOWING.....
THNXX, 4 D PM.. UPDATE SOON


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Posted: 25 July 2008 at 11:12am | IP Logged
Evgenia

name was nice and title is nice!!!

I liked the part 1...

so now these 6 r going 2 fight  4
Evgenia??? wow the idea is gr8

now waiting 4 next update!!!
make it asap!!!

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Posted: 25 July 2008 at 11:48am | IP Logged
nce updte
i havent watched da film
kept teling maself i wud bt nevr hapened lol
bt dis sounds gd
do updte soon

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Posted: 25 July 2008 at 11:52am | IP Logged
hey!....this is exciting!...thanks 4 the PM....n continue soon!

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Posted: 26 July 2008 at 6:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meow23

U KNOW IT KIND OF REMINDED ME ABT HARRY, RON, HERMOINE, HOGWARTS, ELFS, ..DUMBLEDORE,HAGRID
I JUS WENT 2 BAK HARRY PTTER.... IT WAS AMZNGG.. I CLD SOO EASILY VISUALISE D SCENES IN FRONT OF ME... TULY GR88888888.... 2222222222222222222222222222 GUDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
AMZNGGG N MINDBLOWING.....
THNXX, 4 D PM.. UPDATE SOON


 
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
 
 
 
Originally posted by bhanu_rekhag

Evgenia

name was nice and title is nice!!!

I liked the part 1...

so now these 6 r going 2 fight  4
Evgenia??? wow the idea is gr8

now waiting 4 next update!!!
make it asap!!!

 
Thanks!!!
 
 
Originally posted by sweet-niz

nce updte
i havent watched da film
kept teling maself i wud bt nevr hapened lol
bt dis sounds gd
do updte soon
 
Thanks! Watch it, Its wonderful! Will update!
 
 
Originally posted by dmglovernimisha

hey!....this is exciting!...thanks 4 the PM....n continue soon!
 
Thanks! Your welcome! Will continue!


Edited by kdrs - 26 July 2008 at 6:55am

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