Hey jinil...
I loved the frst one more ...probably bcz the second one had some other name than kash so i cldnt imaginewwell...dnno..but it was gud..i m sure maneetians wd love it..
As 4th first one, it actually made me feel bad...at a point i felt like getting in there and get things sorted...grabbbing the two of them together and make them face to face, wait 4them to confess thier faults...or rather the narrator's fault...
But alas!!!i cannot...so u gotta pay me a penalty...u have written it so gracefully..so u have to write another one whch will NOT be cont of ths scene, it will simply be one whr they will reconcile..umm maybe u describe a scene whr they are hugging...
For the readers it will be scene, but for me it will be continuation of the first one...
Since the couples are unnamed, for me they are kash...so i cannot see them getting apart....u ggat write me a "i am sorry i love u" scene...
Okay?
Love...
Sabrina...
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