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Posted: 5 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

DId I read right?

Are u updating?
great 

Yaar I already written it na ... so just need to edit ...dont think I'm become good girl ...im still last oneπŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Yup need to edit 
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Posted: 5 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: .-MaAnEeT-.

Sweet cute story. Lovee it

Geet is maan ki diwani. Maan bohot intelligent hai
He checked spelling on the letter? He he
Reminds me of a romance anime Itazura Na Kiss. 
Can't wait to know what happens next

Glad you like ... I'm not sure but may be playful kiss adapt from anime/webton ..you read that that's why it's same 
Also this OS concept taken from playful kiss so same same πŸ˜†
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Posted: 5 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: taahir004

Congratulations Sabina on your OS 

Thnx ..trying to update 
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          Part 2 - 



             Geet was not wrong about one thing , Maan did come to know about his crazy admirer because of that letter . He is used to get girls attention so didn't care about Geet but he had to admit,  that girl has guts . It's always boys who proposed first but she came forward without hesitation this made him think ,  she is different but still clingy type which he dislike the most , so she can only be in his reject list  .

             Also her letter and it's language did make him laugh loud and he is sure it's another silly girl crush which will go eventually . Correcting her English  was a way to reject her , only if she cares . He may be got many girls attention, but  Geet is from another planet .

                   There is a saying , when you can't get into one's heart , get into his nerves , Geet was doing it perfectly .  From that day he can see her everywhere following him . Be it math class or basket ball practice or guitar class . She was like a shadow following him . First he didn't care as she was not talking just following him but as time passes it start making him irritate . Few times he glared at her as usual she gave him her dreamy look . At  first still it was limited to drooling then she start talking to him and her non stop talking , he felt like killing someone . He was totally clueless how to handle her , no matter what he does or say or try to avoid her , she seems not care ...he never met such stubborn person in his life . 

                 Things become intolerable when Geet and her father came to stay at their place . This was the biggest shock of his life seeing her at his home.  Geet father and his Dad are friends,  more like bichre huye bhai . Geet's house damaged badly due to earth quack so his father forced them to stay in their place.  Geet is Geet, her first reaction was as dramatic as she is. She fainted infront of him , finally her one dream come true as Maan picked her up because of his parents pressure and took her to bed room ... 


            "  haiyyy mein Maan ki bahon mein , sach mein agar kissi chesse ko dil se chaho toh pure kaynaat tumhe usse milane ki koshish mein lag jaata hai "...    

                 " Geet tu pagal hai , think about your house " 

                 " toh kya hua... main ab apni sasural main hoon... aur "     

                  she stopped as something broke behind her , she turned around and saw Maan glaring at her as glass slipped from his hand ... no doubt she is reason behind it ... she gave him silly smile and run to her room leaving an angry Maan behind .

                  The pain he was tolerating at school now at his own home so he has no escaping . She was everywhere just not in his heart . 

               He has no time for date or anything . He is more practical man , for him dating is like time waste . Why wasting time on this when it can be use  in Something else . 

                     For Geet its like dream come true ... everytime everywhere only Maan .. she didn't need to wait for school like old time . Maan is always before him . But now littel problem as final exam coming and as expected she knows nothing .    

                " toh Maan bete kounsi college jaoge ? " His mother Jaya asked at dinning table making Geet aware that even she needs to go to college too ..  

                " umm.. " before he can answer her littel brother spoke up ...

                   " of course XYZ college ...my brother is best , so he will go to best college  ... He is so brilliant not like dumb Geet , bro will get admission easily "      

                  Geet glared at Maan's younger brother showing tongue..maan didn't say anything but his mother stopped Yash..

                " Yash don't say like this ... "

                 Jaya really loves Geet.  She has no daughter , she loves Geet as her own daughter . With two over brilliant sons , she used to get bored as they always busy with themselvs but with Geet now she never feels alone . Geet is like a fresh air in their robotic life , so different from today's make up bimboos . She never met such girl with full of life . And now she has a hidden wish to make Geet her daughter in law . She already started naming her grandchildren too , if only she knew her son .    

              " Geet don't listen to him ...tum bhi XYZ college pe admission logi "    

              Maan control his laugh hearing his  his mother  ' only if you know mom how idiot she is ' Maan muttered in his mind .   

               " ji aunty pakka ... " 

                Geet smiled not losing hope or bad comment effecting her which which always surprise  Maan . He actually like this about her...no matter what she never lose hope always positive ..always a smile on her face . Her attitude her way toward him can be very irritating but he can't ignore the fact that she is good at heart , she think twice before hurting animal forget about person . She never took others bad comment negatively, she is what she is... no mask not pretend . Her stupid crush on him did irritate him but unknown to him he actually noticing her small small things more than anyone .   

                " bete exam coming right ... agar help chahiye toh Maan hai na.. he will help you "  

               Maan start coughing hearing his mother suggestion but couldn't say no , there Geet is on moon '  date night with Maan , Babaji you love me so much '      

           while teaching her he realised physics is more easier than teaching Geet  ... she has literary zero knowledge, how she passed till now is mystery to him . Still he tried his best but Geet was in another zone . Maan was saying something and Geet was busy admiring him . 

                 " Geet ...Geet are you here ? "  

             " huh ..yes yes so you understand what I said " 

               Maan said hopefully as it 5th time he trying to make her understand this chapter . 

             " ha sab samajh gayi " Geet told him seeing his tired face ...

                " ok fine now finish this chapter and show me later ok ,  good night "  without giving her chance to speak he went out feeling too sleepy ...   

               next morning with lots of hope he went to see her math only to see something written  on paper with bold letters...

                 " DEAR Math ,

            I'm sick and tired of finding your X . Just accept the fact that she is gone ..move on dude . There are many fishes in pond, find someone else and spare me.. have some shame, do your own work . "         

              he didn't know if he should cry or laugh at her . " yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar degi "           

                 even after such flop teaching night  , Maan's bad luck she didn't give up ...so he had to teach her everynight . The time he used to get for himself that too went spending on her . Overall his life was running around Geet and Geet...
Edited by Keepdreaming - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Yaar I already written it na ... so just need to edit ...dont think I'm become good girl ...im still last oneπŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒ



hahahah...
tum update kro fir hum decide krenge k tum good girl ho k nahi...πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 5 years ago
#47
Hey Sabina will read and comment soon 
Well I have watched playful kiss πŸ˜†

Would love to read your version πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 5 years ago
#48
See I'm good girl ..update here 
Guys it's OS..so don't expect me to go into detail sab fast forward mood pe hoga ... next gonna be last part ... 
Ya I know Geet can be annoying kya kaare woh bas crazy hai Maan ke liye 
Enjoy 
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Posted: 5 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Khushibloom

Hey Sabina will read and comment soon 

Well I have watched playful kiss  πŸ˜†

Would love to read your version πŸ˜‰

Hehe I love playful kiss ( Korean version ) Taiwanese  not that good 
And I'm copying it only πŸ˜ƒ still hope you will enjoy it khushi
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahibasharma



hahahah...
tum update kro fir hum decide krenge k tum good girl ho k nahi... πŸ˜‰

Updated !!!!!! Surely I'm good β­οΈ